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Is my poem any good? I need to know as soon as possible.
Roses are red
Violets are blue I can't stop thinking about you If I could live forever I know exactly what I would do, I'd spend the rest of my life being with you I don't know if you have a boyfriend or not But I don't care I will give it a shot So here it comes, this is the end So Haley will you be my girlfriend My first poem ever written. Good? Please let me know. |
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