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  • Oct 23, 2011, 03:36 PM
    JimPickens
    Is my poem any good? I need to know as soon as possible.
    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I can't stop thinking about you

    If I could live forever
    I know exactly what I would do,
    I'd spend the rest of my life being with you

    I don't know if you have a boyfriend or not
    But I don't care I will give it a shot

    So here it comes, this is the end
    So Haley will you be my girlfriend


    My first poem ever written. Good? Please let me know.

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