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    Jul 29, 2009, 05:39 PM
    Poem for a friend.
    You are my weakness, my every joy
    I can't stop thinking of you
    Your'e everything i want plus more
    A world without you is a world of dread
    Maybe because i can't get you outta my head.
    Your eyes like warm choocolate
    Your hair like a waterfall of curls
    Please accept my heart
    And i wilnever hurt yours.
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    Aug 1, 2009, 03:18 AM

    It was nice! I gather that this is a friendship where you hope for it to turn into something more?
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    Aug 3, 2009, 10:20 AM

    You are really amazing! this poem shows that your in love with this friend.it's clear for me.by the way I write poetry too
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