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    paigerwaiger94 Posts: 87, Reputation: 3
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    Jun 25, 2009, 07:56 AM
    My new poem
    Forgetting.

    Forgetting, all the hurt that you have been through will be hell.
    Just know, that I am here because you saved me from myself,
    From my own personal hell.
    So when my time comes,
    Promise me that you won't remember,
    All the cruel and wicked things I've done.
    Let it be, your assurance to know,
    That when my time comes, I'll be ready to go.
    You always had a knack,
    For putting yourself last,
    So from now on...
    The first thing I think of,
    When I think to the past...
    Will be you.
    And your memorys of forgetting.
    Forgetting all the hurt that you have been through will be hell.
    Just know, that I am still alive, because you somehow managed to save me from myself.

    Please tell me what you think of my new poem.
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    Jun 25, 2009, 09:59 AM
    Its nice. Seems to be full of emotion.
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    Jun 25, 2009, 10:00 AM

    I love it! Very good. You have a great talent! Thanks for sharing it.
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    Jun 25, 2009, 07:28 PM

    Thank you guys for commenting on my poems.
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    Aug 4, 2009, 10:43 AM

    I adore it!thanks for sharing it
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