[nathan08]

Hey I Wrote Another Song. Was Wondering If You Could Help Me With This One To, Like To See If Its Any Good Or Not. Thanks!


..
I Wish I Never Met You

You don't have to be perfect baby, Im just looking for love
You don't ever have to feel down baby, I've got kiss's and hug's
You don't have to look no further, Baby I can be the one
And I can't just let you go, So I want to let you know, This isn't the end of the road
You know I'm going nowhere, Till death to us part, Baby you know that I care


(Chorus)
But why do I love you so much, Why do I earn for your touch
Why do you keep playing game's, When you know I feel pain
My friends say I'm crazy, But I'm crazy for you
So please tell me your love, Your love isit ture
Sometimes I wish I never met you, No I wish I never met you
But my love is so ture, Baby my love is so ture


You don't ever have to work hard baby, I'll do things for you
You don't ever have to feel frightened baby, I'll be right next to you
You don't ever have to worry, Baby I'll always stay true
Forever and ever baby, It's going to be me and you
And I can't just let you go, So I want to let you know, This isn't the end of the road
You know I'm going nowhere, Till death to us part, Baby you know that I care


(Chorus)
But why do I love you so much, Why do I earn for your touch
Why do you keep playing game's, When you know I feel pain
My friends say I'm crazy, But I'm crazy for you
So please tell me your love, Your love isit ture
Sometimes I wish I never met you, No I wish I never met you
But my love is so ture, Baby my love is so ture


You don't ever have to worry about clothes baby, You know I'll keep you worm
You don't ever have to worry about food baby, You know I'll cook for you
You don't ever have to worry, Baby I'll always love you
And I can't just let you go, So I want to let you know, This isn't the end of the road
You know I'm going nowhere, Till death to us part, Baby you know that I care


(Chorus)
But why do I love you so much, Why do I earn for your touch
Why do you keep playing game's, When you know I feel pain
My friends say I'm crazy, But I'm crazy for you
So please tell me your love, Your love isit ture
Sometimes I wish I never met you, No I wish I never met you
But my love is so ture, Baby my love is so ture

[ajithkumarh]

Hey looks good.
Try writing more.
All the best.

[nathan08]

Thank's :)

[Wondergirl]

It's excellent! (btw, plural nouns do not get apostrophes -- "kisses," not "kiss's" and "hugs," not "hug's" and "thanks," not "thank's" -- apostrophes are for possessives, belonging to something or someone, like "Nathan's gloves")

Have you put it to music yet?

Be careful posting your songs on the Internet. They become fair game for anyone who wants to steal them, add music, and get them recorded. I'd hate for you to be listening to the radio one day and hear your song coming out of it.

[nathan08]

Thanks for all the advise I'll keep them in mind,

And I isn't put them to music yet :)

[defox]

I like it a lot can I sing it?

[nO_NaME_guY]

Good as bro :]
You're really really good at writing songs

[jaydiepie]

Cool as bro... :) u should sell it to a singer for money... pays really good

[Love159]

Dude it good