[sportzislifesarah92]

OK so I wrote this song when my great grandma died. Like a year ago. I'm 14 years old. Its not really a whole song together, more just like a verse and then a chorus and that's it. I was wondering if it is good or not?! So here it is:

You know I've been down that road before,
And never want to go back.
Maybe 'cause I don't want to face,
The cold hard facts.
I've always had someone to lean on,
Somebody to catch me when I fell,
And that someone was you,
But then you fell down as well.

You know I need you,
You know I want you.
But the time has come to realize,
Don't you see?
Your in a better place,
And always with me.
And when the day is done I have to smile,
'cause I know your there...

Hold'n my hand,
Write'n a letter,
Singing a song to make me sleep,
Thinking all the time,
Fight'in all my battles,
Helping me get through it.
And then I see you shining face,
And I know your there,
Praying my prayer.

It doesn't really make a whole lot of sense but to me it does. I want the truth. Don't say ohh its so good and you really think its bad. I want to know. My dream is to become a singer/song writer. And hearing what you think will help me. So let me know.

[Clough]

I think that it is very touching and obviously written from your heart. You have done an excellent job! Please keep practicing writing songs because I think that you could be excellent at doing that.

I am a professional musician in the entertainment industry.