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    Sep 25, 2012, 04:16 PM
    First paragraph on domestic assault
    I'm writing an essay on "does the state have right to show interest in families when harmed?" I need some good suggestions for the first paragraph
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    Sep 25, 2012, 04:22 PM
    Have you done any research?

    How long does this have to be?

    When is it due?

    What does "harm" mean?
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    Sep 25, 2012, 04:30 PM
    Some statistical stuff.. the basics. Some rules. You know. And 4 pages, double spaced. So 2. and like, domestic assult.
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    Sep 25, 2012, 05:12 PM
    You created the title? I would suggest a more defined title. 4 pages isn't enough to write about domestic assault overall. 'Interest' is too vague too. Try some titles on us, There's police, prosecutors, and social service agencies... getting 'involved.'
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    Sep 25, 2012, 05:20 PM
    First and foremost, put together an outline. If you do that, the essay will write itself.

    Pick out one area of "family harm" to focus on. That will guide you in finding statistics.

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