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    Jul 8, 2012, 06:41 PM
    Are these lyrics any good?
    First attempt. Any kind of feedback welcome.. I kind of wrote it with a melody in my head. Don't know if anyone can see or hear what I mean. Maybe it's helpful to say I like Nirvana, Depeche Mode, Pearl Jam, Radiohead, dEUS, Blur, Qotsa, Eels,.


    Title: Mind vs heart

    They'll always say
    You think too much
    But why is it
    I have to be that one

    We had some fun
    Talked a lot
    Didn't care about that much

    (refrain) Mind your heart, mind your heart
    Sometimes things look ed up
    Mind your heart, mind your heart
    But please remind
    How we start

    I guess this is
    The way life goes
    Never thought it
    But it's a disease

    The ones I care about
    Are in my heart
    But the mind plays tricks, I sure can miss

    That's why I guess
    We think that much

    (refrain) Mind your heart, mind your heart
    Sometimes things look ed up
    Mind your heart, mind your heart
    But please remind
    How we start

    Mind your heart, mind your heart
    But keep in mind
    We can't restart
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    Jul 8, 2012, 06:44 PM
    ////explicit ;)
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