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    WannaBeFamous71 Posts: 1, Reputation: 1
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    Jun 3, 2012, 01:10 PM
    Are these good lyrics?
    Your Open Question: Are thede lyrics good?

    Well lately I've been having a lot of crap going on. I don't know I got bored and wrote this but I don't know if its good orr not. Opinions? I want honasty so if its bad tell me. Thanks:D

    There's not title yet,

    Another sad story
    Being play on repeat
    You don't what you doing
    To make them be that mean

    Its such a messed up world
    Cause all they do is judge
    Don't let them get to you.
    You're worth so much

    There's so many things
    You just can't explain, no
    Be the beat you can
    And they won't mean a thing, oh

    Cause someday
    You'll be flying on private jets
    Seeing the world,
    They'll be thinking
    You're the best they've had yet

    You got to great thing going
    Now all you got to do
    Just keep up what your doing
    Ya got to be you.

    That's all I have. Keep in mind I'm 14 and I wrote this in like a half hour ago so opinions ?:D
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    ldarkphoenix Posts: 16, Reputation: 3
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    Jun 7, 2012, 05:13 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by WannaBeFamous71 View Post
    Your Open Question: Are thede lyrics good? ?

    Well lately i've been having a lot of crap going on. I dont know i got bored and wrote this but i dont know if its good orr not. Opinions? I want honasty so if its bad tell me. Thanks:D

    Theres not title yet,

    Another sad story
    Being play on repeat
    You dont what you doing
    To make them be that mean

    Its such a messed up world
    Cause all they do is judge
    Dont let them get to you.
    You're worth so much

    There's so many things
    You just can't explain, no
    Be the beat you can
    And they wont mean a thing, oh

    Cause someday
    You'll be flying on private jets
    Seeing the world,
    They'll be thinking
    Your the best they've had yet

    You gotta great thing going
    Now all you gotta do
    Just keep up what your doing
    Ya gotta be you.

    Thats all i have. Keep in mind i'm 14 and i wrote this in like a half hour ago so opinions ?:D
    It sounds like a good start. I can see this being a good song or something, but it seems a little... hmm... unfinished? But I definitely thing it's good for being done in a half hour.
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