Your Open Question: Are thede lyrics good?

Well lately I've been having a lot of crap going on. I don't know I got bored and wrote this but I don't know if its good orr not. Opinions? I want honasty so if its bad tell me. Thanks:D

There's not title yet,

Another sad story
Being play on repeat
You don't what you doing
To make them be that mean

Its such a messed up world
Cause all they do is judge
Don't let them get to you.
You're worth so much

There's so many things
You just can't explain, no
Be the beat you can
And they won't mean a thing, oh

Cause someday
You'll be flying on private jets
Seeing the world,
They'll be thinking
You're the best they've had yet

You got to great thing going
Now all you got to do
Just keep up what your doing
Ya got to be you.

That's all I have. Keep in mind I'm 14 and I wrote this in like a half hour ago so opinions ?:D

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Originally Posted by WannaBeFamous71

Your Open Question: Are thede lyrics good? ?

Well lately i've been having a lot of crap going on. I dont know i got bored and wrote this but i dont know if its good orr not. Opinions? I want honasty so if its bad tell me. Thanks:D

Theres not title yet,

Another sad story
Being play on repeat
You dont what you doing
To make them be that mean

Its such a messed up world
Cause all they do is judge
Dont let them get to you.
You're worth so much

There's so many things
You just can't explain, no
Be the beat you can
And they wont mean a thing, oh

Cause someday
You'll be flying on private jets
Seeing the world,
They'll be thinking
Your the best they've had yet

You gotta great thing going
Now all you gotta do
Just keep up what your doing
Ya gotta be you.

Thats all i have. Keep in mind i'm 14 and i wrote this in like a half hour ago so opinions ?:D

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It sounds like a good start. I can see this being a good song or something, but it seems a little... hmm... unfinished? But I definitely thing it's good for being done in a half hour.