[Chey5782]

Here jenni, you posted some so I thought I would return the favor. Tear it up, I don't really care about criticism, I know it's good enough for me :rolleyes:


Dancing


Your fingertips

Your tongue

Razors edge.

Cut me.

Flesh, spirit, and soul.

Unceremoniously,

We dance in the light.

I, wishing to be a Bodhisattva.

You, a hero.

Whispering words that fall,

Like cobwebs and blood drops.

We paint, the world around us,

With the footsteps left behind.

[roxypox]

I know you don't care about critism, but I'd love to say I Like it though ;)

[artlady]

You had me at we paint! Actually you had me before that. You had me at fingertips. Cool
Maybe I will put one of mine up for shi$s and giggles :)
I like it,painful ,intense and strong!