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    Oct 17, 2007, 12:24 PM
    Sentence revision
    How would I revise this sentence

    It was a blistering June day; the heat could be seen radiating from the pavement.
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    Oct 17, 2007, 12:29 PM
    I'll help you, but you have to show some initiative.

    How do you think you could revise it?
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    Oct 17, 2007, 01:16 PM
    Doublea1126 disagrees: it sucked
    It sucked because I am not going to do your homework for you. I have already done mine it is your turn.

    Please refer to this Announcement regarding homework.

    Now, I am willing to help, but nobody here will do it for you.
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