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    #21

    Apr 27, 2009, 10:49 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Okay, just something simple for the words in order for us to get the music going.

    I probably won't be on here until around 11:00 tomorrow night because I have to direct my barbershop chorus in a performance as well as a rehearsal after that.

    Later, then...

    I wish for you a good and restful sleep! :)

    Thanks!
    you too clough! =P its awesome we're working on some music together =P
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    Apr 27, 2009, 10:57 PM

    It's been a pleasure! I rarely find people on this site who are into the same things that I am!
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    Apr 27, 2009, 11:11 PM
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    It's been a pleasure! I rarely find people on this site who are into the same things that I am!
    lol nah its awesome we're doing this I hope it turns out to be a huge success =P Actually I know it will!!
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    Apr 27, 2009, 11:26 PM

    Wow... this is cool... you guys are writing a song... can't wait to see how it goes... :)


    Still thinking of names for the song?

    How about "If only she knew..." or "I wish she knew..."

    I guess it does depend on how the song goes and what the words are about. Like if you like her but are scared to tell her, then it could be a secret song to yourself. But if you want her to know, it could be something more straight-forward... like "I've got something to tell u..." or "You need to know..."

    Get a few lines out and I'll keep thinking of words... My command of the english language is not that bad, and I could provide some of the lyrics too... :)
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    Apr 27, 2009, 11:36 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by BlackVY View Post
    Wow... this is cool... you guys are writing a song... can't wait to see how it goes... :)


    Still thinking of names for the song?

    How about "If only she knew..." or "I wish she knew..."

    I guess it does depend on how the song goes and what the words are about. Like if you like her but are scared to tell her, then it could be a secret song to yourself. But if you want her to know, it could be something more straight-forward... like "I've got something to tell u..." or "You need to know..."

    Get a few lines out and I'll keep thinking of words... My command of the english language is not that bad, and I could provide some of the lyrics too... :)
    hehe thanks for the input!! I could tell =P you speak very fashionably with the english language lol. The thing is love songs are so cheesy. I want something well worded and fashionably phrased. Its about a girl I'm interested in but we're still getting to know each other and who knows there might be something more afterwards =P
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    #26

    Apr 27, 2009, 11:39 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    hehe thanks for the input!!! I could tell =P you speak very fashionably with the english language lol. The thing is love songs are so cheesy. I want something well worded and fashionably phrased. Its about a girl im interested in but we're still getting to know each other and who knows there might be something more afterwards =P
    Cool cool... I'll think about it and get back to you tomorrow with anything I can think of. I've been in that situation before, so I have some first-hand experience. Lol! Should be good :)
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    #27

    Apr 27, 2009, 11:41 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by BlackVY View Post
    Cool cool... I'll think about it and get back to you tomorrow with anything I can think of. I've been in that situation before, so I have some first-hand experience. Lol! Should be good :)
    thanks =P you have? Please do tell!! XD
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    Apr 28, 2009, 12:18 AM

    Your input is much appreciated here, BlackVY! Thanks for contributing!
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    #29

    Apr 28, 2009, 06:32 PM

    Hey guys I've been listening to this song for a while non stop. Something similar to this would be very awesome XD

    Oliver James - Ride of your life

    Wishing on a shooting star
    But dreams alone won't get you far
    Can´t deny your feeling anymore
    The world is waiting right outside your door
    What are you waiting for

    Come on here's your chance
    Don't let it slip right through your hands
    Are you ready for the ride of your life
    Your dreams riding on the wind
    Just reach out and pull them in
    Get ready for the ride of your life
    The ride of your life

    In your heart you know what you must do
    You only got yourself to answer to
    Don't let fear of falling hold you down
    Your spirts flying high above the clouds
    You´re glory bound

    Come on here's your chance
    Don't let it slip right through your hands
    Are you ready for the ride of your life
    Your dreams are riding on the wind
    Just reach out and pull them in
    Get ready for the ride of your life

    Your on your way no looking back
    And there's no future living in the past
    Your free at last
    Yeah yeah yeah

    Your free at last

    Come on here's your chance
    Don't let it slip right through your hands
    Are you ready for the ride of your life
    Your dreams are riding on the wind
    Just reach out and pull them in
    Get ready for the ride of your life
    The ride of your life

    Come on
    Come on
    Get ready
    Yeah yeah yeah
    Your dreams are riding on the wind
    Just reach out and pull them in
    Get ready for the ride of your life
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    #30

    Apr 28, 2009, 06:41 PM

    Im not sure if it should be a piano song or guitar song. I would like both but there is no one to play with me lol
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    #31

    Apr 28, 2009, 09:52 PM

    Got some ideas on what to write clough!!

    I want to ask her if she ever thought about me as more than friends perhaps one day. I want to see how incredible things could be and if this could be what I was looking for all this time =P I want to know how things would be if it could be easier to spend more time together, what we would do when we're bored. Lol that's basically the idea lol now to write it XD
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    #32

    Apr 28, 2009, 09:56 PM

    I can write the music just fine! I was waiting for you to write the first line or couple of lines of lyrics.

    Thanks!
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    #33

    Apr 28, 2009, 09:58 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    Im not sure if it should be a piano song or guitar song. I would like both but there is no one to play with me lol
    It can be both!
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    #34

    Apr 28, 2009, 09:59 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    I can write the music just fine! I was waiting for you to write the first line or couple of lines of lyrics.

    Thanks!
    Lol okay ill work on that XD
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    #35

    Apr 28, 2009, 10:02 PM
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    It can be both!
    Got to sleep now clough, got to work tomorrow, ill wrte the first couple lines by tomorrow =P
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    #36

    Apr 28, 2009, 10:15 PM

    Say something about how you'd want to know how it feels to hold her hand, or see her smile her beautiful smile, just for you...
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    #37

    Apr 28, 2009, 10:19 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by BlackVY View Post
    Say something about how you'd want to know how it feels to hold her hand, or see her smile her beautiful smile, just for you...
    Lol thanks black. I've actually tried to go to sleep but I couldn't and I just thought of a pretty nice line, so I got up and type it out so I don't forget it tomorrow XD

    "how do i, tell you i like you?" lol that sounds pretty awesome, I figure it can go in the chorus or something what do you guys think?
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    #38

    Apr 28, 2009, 10:29 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    lol thanks black. i've actually tried to go to sleep but i couldnt and i just thought of a pretty nice line, so i got up and type it out so i dont forget it tomorrow XD

    "how do i, tell you i like you?" lol that sounds pretty awesome, i figure it can go in the chorus or something what do you guys think?
    And the next line could be something like "How can I, Make you mine..."... "When will I, gather the courage... to tell you how I feel about you... feel about you deep inside"
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    #39

    Apr 28, 2009, 10:50 PM

    Okay! Thanks for some ideas on the lyrics! I'll now work on some music. You'll even be able to here it on the Internet! :)
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    Apr 29, 2009, 04:16 AM

    awesome guys lol =P

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