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serena6878 · Nov 28, 2007, 09:08 PM

I sometimes think that my past days involving my happiness and surprise were brought about by a person in the future. Although I know it is just a wonderful dream for me, it still comforts me when I look back on the them.
He kissed me on that evening, which was not far away from the day he left my world.
When people are young, do we know someone close to us truly love us? When hearing "I love you", I lowered my head and felt life was so tranquil.
Is it somebody, or just some sense helps me to leave a young dream with pains in heart, for it knows that both he and I haven't experienced much and thus don't know struggles in the real world. I was so happy at that time, but happiness shouldn't be gotten easily. So we devoted all the strength to say goodbye to each other.
Seeing he vanishes into the scene ahead, I tell the unchanged tranquil air, I love you.
And after that, are we clearer that we have much more important things to finish before finding true love? But on that evening, he kissed me and let me feel he really loved me. It was real in my dream. So now, I sometimes think on that memorable evening, he was from the future time. He comes back to an evening special to me and compensates for a fragile soul.
That makes me smile even though he have left my world.

simoneaugie · Nov 28, 2007, 10:48 PM

What is your question?

oneguyinohio · Nov 28, 2007, 10:55 PM

Your post makes me wonder if you read romance novels before going to sleep? Good to have hopes and dreams though! Hope they come true for you.

Clough · Nov 28, 2007, 11:07 PM

Just as an explanation and some background for why the above might have been written by serena6878, this is the Board that has to do with Writing. It can be a place where, in addition to asking questions, a person can just be creative in their thoughts. serena6878 has had some recent difficulties in her life. She likes to express and work out how she feels through various types of writing, some similar in style to the above and some, also in poetic form.

Hi, Serena!

I hope that you remember me! I hope that you are doing well now! At least better than you were! It has been a number of months since we have communicated with one another. Remember that quiz that you private messaged to me some time ago? The results were astounding!

What you have written above would really look great as a poem, if you were to re-work it some and also put it into column format. You wouldn't have to use a lot of rhyming words either. I really like your thoughts and some of the colorful, descriptive words that you use!

Good job! :)

snasheya · Nov 28, 2007, 11:19 PM

Hey Clough

What's the quiz about?

Clough · Nov 28, 2007, 11:23 PM

Originally Posted by snasheya

Hey Clough

What's the quiz about?

Hey, snasheya! :)

I will let you know! But, it's best to do it in private messages so that the results don't get spoiled. It is really cool! Has worked with everyone with whom I have tried it except for one person. Reason being for it not working? I don't know.

Wondergirl · Nov 28, 2007, 11:33 PM

Are you talking about me behind my back?

Clough · Nov 28, 2007, 11:35 PM

Originally Posted by Wondergirl

Are you talking about me behind my back?

To what is this in reference? Did I mention your name?

Wondergirl · Nov 28, 2007, 11:37 PM

I'm teasing you. Wasn't I the one who flunked your test?

serena6878 · Nov 29, 2007, 10:28 AM

Clough, thank you!
I am grateful you still remember me. You have a kind, loving heart.