[Clough]

You've made some excellent suggestions there, ohsohappy!

[ohsohappy]

Thank you! I like to think positively! :) It helps people focus more throughout the day. Incorporating that into her music could give her some very good insight. I think a lot of her influence comes from what she listens to. Which is good, but I'm sure she could find a way to put more of herself in there. I'm not saying she has to write Hannah Montana songs (I can't stand her music) But, something more personal to her.

[Clough]

Hi again, ohsohappy!

Perhaps what she is writing is very personal to her? It will take a bit of delving to find that out, though.

I do like you idea about accentuating positive things! An excellent thought by you!

What we write, is a matter of choice...

Thanks!

[ohsohappy]

Well yeah that's quite possible. But even so, It would be an excellent idea for her to delve and express her happy side. Soo much sorrow for one so young.

[AmyLeefreak]

Oh, gosh I hate Hannah Montana and them but, I'll try. Happy songs are just so hard to do without being all corny.

[AmyLeefreak]

Well, like I said I'm just now learning and I'm trying to play a song called Good Enough by Evanescence. a.k.a Amy Lee.

[AmyLeefreak]

It's funny when you broke my heart
It was a rainy day
Clouds closing in
To say I made a mistake
Cried myself to sleep tonight
Thinking "What have I done"
But, when I thought life was washed away
I opened my eyes to find it wasn't like yesterday

Behinde the black lace
Opens up the world
Nothing to tell me
I was better off alone
I stand in the sun
To enbrace the feeling
Not even caring if it's not me

It's Saturday and I sit here missing
Everything that brought me to life
All the tree's in my field of innocne
Made my heart race
But, you came and took me away
I wore a smile on my face
Looking back I know it's still sits
Deep inside

Behinde the black lace
Opens up the world
Nothing to tell me
I was better off alone
I stand in the sun
To embrace the feeling
Not even caring if it's not me

(That was my first kind of Happy song thing) I'll work on it later

[AmyLeefreak]

Wow! I think I did a really good job. But, please let me know if you find anything that needs to be fixed before I start to work on some music for it.


Lay here
So I'm not alone
Now you hate me
Without a guess I would fall
Made myself believe that
He's so wrong and could never save me

Breathing without me
Your only breathing without me
Just two worlds between us
I know it's hard
But, don't follow me
I've found my place without you
My name was on that grave before you
There's nothing you can do
I've fallen into his trap
Unforgiven, I reached for his hand

Don't take in each word
They say I left becaues I'm worthless
Never to think that their words took me over the edge
When you've crossed that line
Tell me how does it feel
To be so cold inside
Your body becomes numb
I need to feel something again

Breathing without me
Your only breathing without me
Just two worlds between us
I know it's hard
But, don't follow me
I've found my place without you
My name was on that grave before you
There's nothing you can do
I've fallen into his trap
Unforgiven, I reached for his hand

I'm better off without this
But, why did you lie
She died and you siad I'd be Ok
He touched me and you said you had me
What happened to never letting go?
I thought I knew you
I couldn't stand it anymore

Breathing without me
I'm just breathing without you now
Just two different worlds
And yet you cry as lay
In you arms
Drinking in your tears
I lay there bleeding
But, I know I'm still here
It's just not the same as yesterday...

[Clough]

Hi again, AmyLeefreak!

I'm still not sure what you're able to do, musically. Are you really able to play the sheet music to "Good Enough" by Evanescence on the piano?

If you could give me more of an idea concerning what you're able to play, that would be helpful.

Thanks!

[AmyLeefreak]

Well, I'm just now learning. I'm only able to play at my friends house and will be taking lessons soon. I'm in choir so I'm learning how to also read music a little better. So I'm a little unsure myself

[Clough]

Hi again, AmyLeefreak!

So, are you able to play both the right and left hand parts at the same time for what you're wanting to play, please?

Thanks!

[ohsohappy]

Well, I'm just now learning. I'm only able to play at my friends house and will be taking lessons soon. I'm in choir so I'm learning how to also read music a little better. So I'm a little unsure myself

Learing to read music get's easier with practice. I've been doinmg it for nearly 8 years and I still get stuck sometimes. But it's a really good skill to have. I'ts pretty much like reading another language. The hardes part for me is the rythms, not the notes. You'll do fine!! Just keep practicing! :)

[redhed35]

Hey,I've been following your post,your songs are very dark,but I think with the haunting music they will be very good..
There is a song by alanis morrisete called 'uninvited' that kind of melody might suit..

You know how you want the song to sound! Keep up the good work,your doing great.

[Clough]

How do you want your song to sound, AmyLeefreak? Also, would you like to be able to play it on some kind of a keyborad?

Thanks!

[AmyLeefreak]

Well, I'm not really sure. I know I want it to be very dreary with just a piano with the first verse and then have it build up; like the anger of girl in the story. I will be singing it and I have kind of a low voice that can hit high notes (It's werid) So when the song hit's it's piont of just mmm... letting the music burst out it be just be harder.

[AmyLeefreak]

There's something in the wind
A feeling I only get
When I see you
Time passes by
And I still want the memory to haunt me
There's something wrong
I'm not alone
Your holding me in your arms
God help me if I'm dreaming

Moonless night's turn to a shad of grey
The wind blows softly at my ear
Whisper's of their story's
Breaking the silence
Once breaking me
I'm not the only one
Now I'm not alone

Laying here
Looking up at sky
You say that you love me
I don't even have to think
I've loved you to
And I know I'll have to watch the dream fade away
I just want to live this day

[AmyLeefreak]

Do you hear her screaming?
Out my pain
Such a pity that I ruined her life
Just know that
No matter what she said
I'm still breathing

So cry, I'm still here
Bleed, out the fear
I say fall but, no ones there
They all left long ago

You tell me
That you have it all
Then why do you cry on the inside?
Your heart is broken
Along with anything you ever had

So cry, I'm still here
Bleed, out the fear
I say fall but, no ones there
They all left along ago

Your so blinded
In the light
While I lay in the dark
When I cry when your gone
Your off getting what you've ask for

[AmyLeefreak]

Oh, where has she gone to
Just yesterday she breathed
With such joy
But, now were not the same
It's much colder than yesterday
And he even hides the truth
She knows it was you

Oh, where, where has she gone to?
Just yesterday she was here
Holding the child you've taken
Breathing out his last breath
Now were not the same
It's much colder than yesterday

Tell me do you cry at night
Do you regret goodbye
I remember the words
"Oh, how he loves me so"
And even though you hide the truth
She knows it's you
Hands around her neck
Holding onto her last breath

Where has Laci gone to?
Drowning deep in your sencless hate
And yet you lie to me
Saying that you were blinded
He feels no sorrow for
His mistake

[Clough]

Hi again, AmyLeefreak!

I can see that you're writing again. Is what you've written in post #38 a continuation of the song in post #37, please?

Thanks!

[AmyLeefreak]

Well, I guess it could be but, the second one is about a friend of mine that died and the other is just random