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    TheRomanticDude Posts: 6, Reputation: 1
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    May 24, 2009, 09:30 AM
    Song writing
    Ok well this is another song... Its not finished so if you want to you can help me finish it but yeah tell me what you think about it

    Her life is fading and were just waiting
    Cause there's nothing we can do..
    Her dreams are so clear she learned the hard way
    Maybe someday she'll change her mind..
    And I'm just praying that her mind clears
    I knew the problem then and I knew that its so bad...

    She's so exciting, She's so inviting, and She's way to pretty
    To throw it all away and I will be there for her
    Cause when she's around me everythings a blur
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    Jun 5, 2009, 05:47 PM
    Her life is fading and were just waiting
    Cause there's nothing we can do..
    Her dreams are so clear she learned the hard way
    Maybe someday she'll change her mind..
    And I'm just praying that her mind clears
    I knew the problem then and I knew that its so bad...

    She's so exciting, She's so inviting, and She's way to pretty
    To throw it all away and I will be there for her
    Cause when she's around me everythings a blur
    Her mustache is actually animal fur
    I love the way she pets it
    When she's bored she looks enorexic

    I like to make her smile
    But then she makes a pile of her arm pit hair
    That she won at the fair

    I told her to shave her face
    But she looked at me in disgrace
    She said to never lie
    But I really had to try

    Her face blurred my eyes
    Her body bruised the lies
    That I told her every day
    I said stay away,
    But she never said okay

    I got tired of the lying
    All the hate and the crying
    I told her ill hug you and ill kiss you
    But don't come crying to me if I accidentally diss you
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    Jun 6, 2009, 06:09 PM

    Lmao @ BackFromTheDead

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