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    Jun 23, 2009, 07:36 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    okay! if you guys come up with something that sounds cool let me know =P
    Cool cool... work hard... enjoy, and let us know what you come up with when you do :)
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    Jun 23, 2009, 07:39 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by BlackVY View Post
    Cool cool... work hard... enjoy, and let us know what you come up with when you do :)
    Imagine if she hears this song on the radio one day, I would love to see her facial expression lol.

    AHHHH no more day dreaming!! >_< Ill just work on the song for now =P
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    Jun 23, 2009, 07:40 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    Imagine if she hears this song on the radio one day, i would love to see her facial expression lol.

    AHHHH no more day dreaming!!! >_< Ill just work on the song for now =P
    Haha... I'm picturing the dropping of her jaw... and the reddening of her face... lol!

    All good... work on the song... see how it goes... best of luck... :)
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    Jun 23, 2009, 07:45 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    okay! if you guys come up with something that sounds cool let me know =P
    Will do :)
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:11 PM

    Okay guys I decided not to write a song about the ex. Im currently working on a new piece and I hope this will finally be the one I complete.

    This song is about a journey through life, only the simple things matter the most, reaching out for your dreams.

    Any ideas on what are some things I can sing about? I like something classy, well worded yet simple and original.
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:14 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    Okay guys i decided not to write a song about the ex. Im currently working on a new piece and i hope this will finally be the one i complete.

    This song is about a journey through life, only the simple things matter the most, reaching out for your dreams.

    Any ideas on what are some things i can sing about? I like something classy, well worded yet simple and original.

    Are you looking for a title or a subject within life?

    Cause I kind of liked 'simple things' as a title
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:19 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by albear View Post
    are you looking fora title or a subject within life?

    cause i kinda liked 'simple things' as a title
    Well I kind of got a chorus down. I got a title too. Just need some stuff to talk about in the verses. Thanks!
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:21 PM

    k, any chance of seeing the chorus, it would probably help with writing things that link to it
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:25 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by albear View Post
    k, any chance of seeing the chorus, it would probably help with writing things that link to it
    Sure. It goes likethis

    Ill be damned if you came all this way,
    And you're still not free.
    All you got to do is believe,
    And reach for your dreams.
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:28 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    Sure. It goes likethis

    Ill be damned if you came all this way,
    and you're still not free.
    All you gotta do is believe,
    and reach for your dreams.
    Hmmm maybe a verse per stage in life
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    Jul 2, 2009, 07:30 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by albear View Post
    hmmm maybe a verse per stage in life
    hmmm well I haven't exactly been through all the stages yet lol

    but you got any ideas of what are some stuff I can write? =P
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    Jul 2, 2009, 08:36 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by none12345 View Post
    hmmm well i havent exactly been through all the stages yet lol

    but you got any ideas of what are some stuff i can write? =P
    Child stage - big events and your dreams

    Young adult stage - big events and dreams (notice the change)

    Adulthood - what you think your dreams will be, kind of looking to the future sort of thing (and notice the change)

    Old age - what your dreams would be then and maybe regrets if you didn't manage to ahieve them before you die

    That's a rough out line of what I was thinking of, soz my minds blank on lyrics
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    #33

    Jul 3, 2009, 12:57 PM

    Wow! I wonder how I missed this thread when it started?

    Thanks!
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    Jul 3, 2009, 07:55 PM

    Thanks albear. It started a few weeks ago I reckon, clough lol
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    Jul 3, 2009, 07:58 PM

    No worries :)
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    Jul 5, 2009, 01:03 AM

    I'm sorry that I haven't been around much, all! Have been ill an been in the hospital like I was before for a brief period.

    I hate it when they stick me with all of those needles!

    Thanks!
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    Jul 14, 2009, 08:31 PM

    Alrighty guys its been a while but I've finally written some verses on top of the chorus I had before guys.

    Here's how it goes I hope it doesn't sound too lame lol

    All This Way:

    Just move along when hope is gone tonight
    You take a walk in something called life
    It has its ups and dows and slides
    Dont you fall apart this time

    Ill be damned if you came all this way
    And you're still not free
    All you gotta do is believe
    And reach for your dreams

    Just sing along when pain is gone tonight
    The stars are shining bright for you
    Dont you carry on this lonely fight
    And fight for what is true....

    Ill be damned if you came all this way
    And you're still not free
    All you gotta do is believe
    And reach for your dreams

    What do you guys think? Any touch ups do you think would make it sound better? And also I need some help on the bridge =P Thanks!
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    #38

    Jul 20, 2009, 04:36 PM

    All right guys, here's a raw version of my song. Thanks for all your help, special thanks to amhd. I hope I'm not that very bad of a singer =P. Some support and constructive crticism would be appreciated lol.

    YouTube - All this way Acoustic (original)
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    #39

    Jul 20, 2009, 04:40 PM

    That's not half bad none, like it, maybe a bit of work on getting the right pitch towards the end of the lines, but other than that, t'was all right :)
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    Jul 20, 2009, 04:42 PM

    Lmao albear. Was it horrible? XD

    I need some real honesty here, if its really bad I need to know lols
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