[nathan08]

Hey I Wrote Some Lyrics. Tell Me What You Think .It's Called MR. Right..


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She got the charm of a angel she got a nicer arse than j lo,
And I love the way her hair goes down to her ankle, and we get along so well,
But now I see a change in her and I don't no what to say
I don't want her to go away
But now she treats me like a ,
What did I do to deserve this (what did I do to deserve this)
But..


I think that she found a new mr right, right, (mr right, right)
And all my friends say she left because I acted like napoleon dynamite, (napoleon dynamite), but there's just one thing you see I wish it could go back to just her and me
Because I love that girl unconditionally,
And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (thinks of me)

Now tonight is the night of the prom night,
And I have to get her back, I really hve to get her back,
Because my heart don't tell me lie's
That man she's with I do despise, it brings tears to my eyes,
But..

I think that she found a new mr right, right, (mr right, right)
And all my friends say she left because I acted like napoleon dynamite, (napoleon dynamite), but there's just one thing you see I wish it could go back to just her and me
Because I love that girl unconditionally,
And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (thinks of me)

And without her its darker than a dim light,
So this has to be the night, the night I act like mr right,
The love I have for her is killing me, need proof just take one hard look at me.
Wish I new what I could do, (yeah I wish I new what I could do)

Now she walks in still the pretty'est girl I've ever seen,
With someone that use to be me, now she don't even look twice at me,
I swear to god that I could change, but she got that new romance,
Wish I could just ask for one more dance,
But..

I think that she found a new mr right, right, (mr right, right)
And all my friends say she left because I acted like napoleon dynamite, (napoleon dynamite), but there's just one thing you see I wish it could go back to just her and me
Because I love that girl unconditionally,
And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (thinks of me)

Yeah I wish that she still thinks of me
Yeah I hope she still thinks of me
I could pray to god about her day and night, but now I no that one thing is right
I could never be her mr right, never be her mr right,
And one thing is for sure I shouldd of stopped her from walking out the door,
But now I no I'll never be, no I'll never be her mr right, no I'll never be her mr right


And there's still just one thing you see I still wish it could go back to just her and me,
Because I love that girl unconditionally,
And its times like this I hope she still thinks of me, (still thinks of me).

[nathan08]

Some More Lyrics I Wrote, Tell Me What You Think .Its Called Jesus In The Manger
(Not So Long This One)



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Girl I miss you, I always tell you offton enough, yeah girl I miss you,
Wish I could take you back in my arms so girl I could kiss you,
A million dollars don't amount to how much I love you, and I don't get why you left me,
We were so good together just like gavin and stacey,
I hope you miss me,
I don't want to end up like k-fed and britney,
So girl I hope you miss me

Because I'm thinking of you
I don't no what to do
But you just shut me out
Just shut the door
Its like you don't want to see me anymore, no you don't want to see me anymore..

So can someone tell me, should I waste time on you,
You could be marryed, I wouldn't even have a clue
But I no I have to find you, because that little voice in side my head said I have to,
Yeah that little voice in side my head said I have to,
So don't treat me like a stranger just remember when I use to hug you,
Like mary did with jesus in the manger, just like jesus in the manger


So where are you, please just give a little sigh
We were meant to be, meant to be forever and always
So tell me one thing are you in pain from what your causing
Because when my heart brakes, I no that your heart brakes with me too
But its like you isn't even got a clue now, so should I come find you
The darkest night wouldn't stop me from seeing you,
Your perfume lingers, so I no if I was getting any closer, and I really hope I am..

So can someone tell me, should I waste time on you,
You could be marryed I wouldn't even have a clue
But I no I have to find you, because that little voice in side my head said I have to,
Yeah that little voice in side my head said I have to,
So don't treat me like a stranger just remember when I use to hug you.
Like mary did with jesus in the manger, just like jesus in the manger

[nathan08]

Some More Lyrics I Wrote, Tell Me What You Think .Its Called She's A Flirt



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I've loved this girl ever since I saw her, she was like my best friend
Someone I could talk to, she would never ignore you
She's always happy, that's what I like about her
No I would never lay a hand on her, she don't ever have to fear me
But there's just one thing that gets me..
(I said there's just one thing that gets me)..

Yeah!
She flirt's with other guy's
But I don't no why
And she even got the cheek to still look my in my eyes, and say she love's me
Why does she flirt with guys. Isit because she think's I'm ulgy
Well not everyone is perfect, (no not everyone is perfect)

But I no your never change
So I just need to watch out, because your tear my heart Right out
And that's with out a doubt
But I no you can flirt on and on and on..

Well if you want to flirt, go ahead, because its OK With me
But when I say such things, I feel lonely,
It make's me think of just one thing, that one thing is you you see,
And how much I love you..

Yeah!
She flirt's with other guy's
But I don't no why
And she even got the cheek to still look my in my eyes, and say she love's me
Why does she flirt with guys. Isit because she think's I'm ulgy
Well not everyone is perfect, (no not everyone is perfect)

And if we were to fall apart because of this, you would never see me smile (no you would never see me smile)..
While all the while your still off flirting, and its such a tragedy,
Because we talked about getting marryed,
And now you isn't even here with me, (no you isn't even here with me)

But your out there, flirting with tho's other guys, tho's jack the rippers in disguise,
So come home please, I can keep you warm, I can keep you safe, safe from all this pain your feeling,
Stay here with me and you can Just flirt with me, when you flirt with me its like my remedy

But I no your never change
So I just need to watch out, because your tear my heart out
And that's with out a doubt
But I no you can flirt on and on and on..

Yeah!
She flirt's with other guy's
But I don't no why
And she even got the cheek to still look me in the eyes, and say she love's me
Why does she flirt with guys. Isit because she think's I'm ulgy
Well not everyone is perfect, (no not everyone is perfect)

[nathan08]

Some More Lyrics I Wrote, Tell Me What You Think .Its Called It's Over



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You cheated on me,
I don't no what do, no I don't what to do,
I isn't even got to clue,
But I still love you
That's all you need to know,
Yeah I still love you,
But you cheated on me! (you cheated on me!)
Well!.

You can kiss thos other guys, you can sleep with thos other guys
You could kiss a thousand guys, you can sleep with a thousand guys
And I would still love you, but I couldn't take the pain
So I guess its over!
So I guess its over!
We need to go our separate ways,
Girl its over, (I said girl its over!)

And you know I treated you so well,
I gave you my heart,
You said you loved me,
I even used to chase you around like a love sick puppy, (like a love sick puppy),
I know we use to argu sometimes, but we always sorted things out,
You even said I could trust you, and you took all that trust away,
Well!.

You can kiss thos other guys, you can sleep with thos other guys
You could kiss a thousand guys, you can sleep with a thousand guys
And I would still love you, but I couldn't take the pain
So I guess its over!
So I guess its over!
We need to go our separate ways,
Girl its over, (I said girl its over)

And every night I would have think of you
And all the things we could do
We sheared some good times. Times I never will forget
First time I kissed you,
I know you was the one
But its like you don't even care,
You must think its all just games and fun
But your mistaken!
And I'm hurting.
Your mistaken and I'm now hurting
Well!.

You can kiss thos other guys, you can sleep with thos other guys
You could kiss a thousand guys, you can sleep with a thousdand guys
And I would still love you, but I couldn't take the pain
So I guess its over!
So I guess its over!
We need to go our separate ways,
Girl its over (I said girl its over! I said girl its over)

But I want to see you happy
I no I could make you happy
But all this cheating, I just couldn't take the pain
No! I couldn't take the pain

[Clough]

Hi, nathan08!

You've done a lot of writing and posted some very creative thoughts! I haven't read everything, but what I've seen so far is pretty good and well thought out! For them to be songs, they do need to have a certain structure to them. I can help you with that.

If you were to post some lyrics in the Writing topic area of this site, I could show you how you might put them to music - for real!

It would be best to start with something shorter than what you've already written here, though.

Do you play a musical instrument and have you ever had lyrics that you wrote set to music?

Thanks!

[nathan08]

Hey! I Isn't Wrote Any Lyrics To Music Yet. I Don't Play Any Instruments, I Was Thinking About Playing The Electric Guitar, Thanks For The Comment About My Lyrics ByTheWay, I Just Do It For A Hobby! But Hopefully You Can Help Me Make Them Better.