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  • Jun 23, 2009, 06:46 PM
    paigerwaiger94
    My new poem.
    My friend.
    I don't know what it is,
    That you saw in me.
    Said my love was a distraction,
    That you didn't really need.
    Somewhere in this time,
    I surely fell in love.
    Our lives intertwined,
    My angel from above.
    So I cried most every night,
    Knowing it must end.
    You didn't love as I did.
    I was "just a friend."
    I've always heard the saying,
    All good things must end.
    So I guess this is goodbye.
    Nice loving you...
    My friend.



    Please tell me what you think.
  • Jun 23, 2009, 08:50 PM
    BeautyFromPain7
    It's great. Really nice job! :)
  • Jun 23, 2009, 09:01 PM
    mudweiser

    I like it. Good work.

    Sarah
  • Jun 24, 2009, 09:24 AM
    paigerwaiger94

    Thank you guys for commenting.
  • Aug 4, 2009, 10:47 AM
    nothing lasts
    Your amazing that's what I could say
  • Aug 4, 2009, 11:03 AM
    paigerwaiger94

    Thank you!!

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