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  • Jun 23, 2009, 06:43 PM
    paigerwaiger94
    My new poem
    In memory:
    If I had to go through it again,
    And go through all the pain,
    I would do it in a heartbeat,
    For everything to gain.
    Through all my imperfections,
    You only gave me love,
    Until the day you left me,
    For heaven up above.
    I still feel you with me...
    Still feel you when I wake.
    I still feel the pain,
    Still revel in the heartache.
    You will always be a memory,
    In my mind and in my heart.
    Though your no longer with me,
    Our souls will never part.
    I never got the chance,
    To say how much I cared.
    So this is in memory,
    Of everything we've shared.


    Please tell me what you think.
  • Jun 24, 2009, 12:28 PM
    justcurious55

    This is only the second poem of yours that I've read on here. But I think you've got a lot of talent from the little bit I've gotten to read
  • Jun 24, 2009, 01:29 PM
    Just Dahlia
    I love it:)
  • Jun 25, 2009, 07:48 AM
    paigerwaiger94

    Thank you guys for your comments.
  • Aug 4, 2009, 10:45 AM
    nothing lasts

    It's really sad and it made me cry a lot.is it true what u wrote?
  • Aug 4, 2009, 11:04 AM
    paigerwaiger94

    Yes, its true.
  • Aug 6, 2009, 05:54 PM
    k1kxo19
    That's a very deep poem but its beautiful. Poetry is art and you have ccreated a masterpeice!! Love it. Keep writing :D
  • Aug 7, 2009, 02:18 AM
    artlady

    Beautiful,very heartfelt and endearing !
    Keep writing ,your emotion comes through beautifully!

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