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  • Jun 7, 2009, 08:34 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote me on this poem!
    Its called THE FACE

    This is the face that bares my name.
    Plain, ordinary, all the same.
    Look harder and you might see,
    This face tells you no part of me.
    It doesn't say how I feel inside.
    It doesn't tell you the things I hide.
    My face doesn't reveal what I think
    Of life, love, or politics.
    But you judge this face and you judge me,
    By what you look at, and how you see.
    But that's not where the truth lies.
    The truth is hidden behind my eyes.
    This is the face that bares my name.
    But it will never tell you how I feel,
    Or who I am!

    Written by ironclad04, 1998
    This one goes out to my new found buddy Altenweg!!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 08:38 PM
    Clough

    Hi, ironclad04!

    That's quite nice! It seems to describe a type of stoicism.

    Thanks!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 08:46 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Hi, ironclad04!

    That's quite nice! It seems to describe a type of stoicism.

    Thanks!


    Actually I was writing it at the time of a rasicm controversy we had in my school about blacks, and vietminese, and jewish people! I took great pride in presenting this poem to them in front of the whole school, thought they could use a little pride! Thanks for the input!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 08:51 PM
    Wondergirl

    Very, very nice! It rhymes without sounding rhyme-y (like so many do).

    Now, since I'm the AMHD queen of spelling and grammar (and punctuation), "bares" should be "bears."
  • Jun 7, 2009, 08:55 PM
    Clough
    Gosh, Wondergirl! I didn't know you were a queen! :D
  • Jun 7, 2009, 08:59 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Gosh, Wondergirl! I didn't know you were a queen! :D

    There's a lot you don't know about me. And don't forget to bow before you leave.
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:01 PM
    Clough

    I'm already standing up in your presence, your HIGHNESS!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:01 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Gosh, Wondergirl! I didn't know you were a queen! :D

    Did I miss something?? Didn't know you guys know each other?? Thanks for quoting me though, I will have to change that, did I write bares? It sound good to me at the time! Lol
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:03 PM
    Clough

    Yeah, we know each other! She wants to be able to jazz piano!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:04 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ironclad04 View Post
    did i miss something??? didnt know u guys know eachother??? thanks for quoting me though, i will have to change that, did i write bares?? it sound good to me at the time!! lol

    We're both from Illinois, so we got to know each other a long time ago. I know more about him than he knows about me, hee hee.
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:05 PM
    Clough

    Don't make me have to come over there, Wondergirl! Behave yourself, now!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:07 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Don't make me have to come over there, Wondergirl! Behave yourself, now!

    I have the American Library Association on my side. Who's on yours?
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:10 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    We're both from Illinois, so we got to know each other a long time ago. I know more about him than he knows about me, hee hee.

    Wow! U guys are something!! I was just goofing off and found myself all alone!? Until one day!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:11 PM
    Clough

    The Barbershop Harmony Society! There's over 30,000 of us!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:11 PM
    Clough
    And, watch it, Wondergirl! I can delete you! He, he!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:12 PM
    Clough

    The cursor is mightier than the sword!!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:14 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    The cursor is mightier than the sword!!!!

    Curlyben is my BFF. HA!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:14 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    And, watch it, Wondergirl! I can delete you! He, he!

    OK clough, maybe I should drop guitar and stick to martial arts?? Wondergirl, lets do it!! Lol prepare for annilation clough, your good man, but I got to give it to wondergirl!? Sorry! Keep quoting me man, so wondergirl?? What do you really think?
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:16 PM
    Wondergirl

    Ironclad, the guy I dated for six years during part of high school and all of college but never married (but should have) lives in Brandon, VT. Are you anywhere near there?
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:17 PM
    Clough

    I think that you should take up something musical. Because, I can help you with learning about how to play things right on this site!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:19 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    ironclad, the guy I dated for six years during part of high school and all of college but never married (but should have) lives in Brandon, VT. Are you anywhere near there?

    Girl I'm in the heart of burlington vt! This place never sleeps!! Sounds like fraklin county?
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:26 PM
    Alty

    I'm your new found buddy? That was quick. ;)

    Wondergirl, you may be the Queen of grammar and spelling, but I am the Queen of rabbits.

    Bow to the bunny babe! ;)

    Clough, I play accordion. Laugh and I will smite you! :cool:
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:26 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    The Barbershop Harmony Society! There's over 30,000 of us!

    ALA members totaled, as of July 31, 2008, 67,027 members.
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:28 PM
    crazychick56

    Oh my goodness... I bow down to you now haha because as well do you but I do too write poems and you write the kind I like... rhyming:) hehe... ;) anyhoo I think it was amazing... write on!! This is a great idea for us poets out there:)
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:30 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Altenweg View Post
    I'm your new found buddy? That was quick. ;)

    Wondergirl, you may be the Queen of grammar and spelling, but I am the Queen of rabbits.

    Bow to the bunny babe! ;)

    Clough, I play accordion. Laugh and I will smite you! :cool:

    I too, play a bit of accordion myself! :D
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:35 PM
    Alty
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    I too, play a bit of accordion myself! :D

    Really? I thought I was the last accordion player on earth!

    I was forced to take lessons as a young teen, took them for 2 years, then I outgrew the accordion and decided not to continue.

    I'm not bad though, can still play a good Umpa Umpa song. ;)

    We could start a band! :cool:
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:36 PM
    Wondergirl

    I can hear "Lady of Spain" wafting in though the window now...
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:37 PM
    Alty
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    I can hear "Lady of Spain" wafting in though the window now..........

    Is that a good thing? :confused:
  • Jun 7, 2009, 09:38 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by crazychick56 View Post
    oh my goodness..... i bow down to you now haha becasue as well do you but i do too write poems and you write the kind i like.... rhyming:) hehe.....;) anyhoo i think it was amazing... write on!!! this is a great idea for us poets out there:)

    Thanks girl!! U know maybe I will write u something one of these days?? Word of caustion, don't [edit] off Altenweg!! Lol, be were doing battle of the sexes!! She won by one nut!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:00 PM
    Clough

    Sorry, but I did need to edit your post, ironclad04! Got to be careful about the language that's used here. What's posted can influence children into thinking that anything is okay.

    Thanks!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:09 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Sorry, but I did need to edit your post, ironclad04! Gotta be careful about the language that's used here. What's posted can influence children into thinking that anything is okay.

    Thanks!

    And I and the rest of the librarians will be offended.
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:14 PM
    Alty
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    And I and the rest of the librarians will be offended.

    Not to mention that we'd have to wash his mouth out with soap. :p
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:15 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    And I and the rest of the librarians will be offended.

    True, true!! ironclad04 is assamed! I get carried away, my bad!!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:22 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Altenweg View Post
    Not to mention that we'd have to wash his mouth out with soap. :p

    May I watch?:D
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:27 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    May I watch?:D

    What!? Ganging up on me!! Ill transform into the buddha, and you won't be able to catch me!! Ill just bonuce away!!
    So Alty, what is sudoku? Is it easy?
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:29 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    May I watch?:D

    I'll do the honors! How's about Lava or lye soap?
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:36 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    I'll do the honors! How's about Lava or lye soap?

    That's it! Lol picking on the buddha!
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:43 PM
    Clough

    I'll clean the Buddha right out of you!

    I think I'm opting for the lye soap...
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:50 PM
    ironclad04
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    I'll clean the Buddha right out of ya!

    I think I'm opting for the lye soap...

    Ohhh, ganging up on me!! Ill bounce away! Lol
  • Jun 7, 2009, 10:54 PM
    Clough

    Yeah, Buddha was kind of a bouncy fella!

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