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  • May 28, 2012, 05:44 PM
    kite9200
    Could you help me write a conversation between two poems?
    Write a conversation in which the two boys who appear in "Tableau" discuss what happens in "Incident" with the eight-year-old boy who was the victim of the incident.

    Bring them to life!

    Tableau: For Donald Duff
    Countee Cullen

    Locked arm in arm they cross the way,
    The black boy and the white,
    The golden splendor of the day,
    The sable pride of night.

    From lowered blinds the dark folk stare,
    And here the fair folk talk,
    Indignant that these two should dare
    In unison to walk.

    Oblivious to look and word
    They pass, and see no wonder
    That lightning brilliant as a sword
    Should blaze the path of thunder.

    Incident
    Countee Cullen

    Once, riding in old Baltimore,
    Heart-filled, head-filled with glee,
    I saw a Baltimorean
    Keep looking straight at me.

    Now I was eight and very small,
    And he was no whit bigger,
    And so I smiled, but he poked out
    His tongue, and called me “Nigger.”

    I saw the whole of Baltimore
    From May until December;
    Of all the things that happened there
    That's all that I remember.
  • May 28, 2012, 05:56 PM
    Wondergirl
    So, have you started yet?
  • May 28, 2012, 05:57 PM
    JudyKayTee
    Sure, I'll start on it now. How many words do you need?

    Will we split your final grade, will it be all mine, how will that work?
  • May 28, 2012, 06:02 PM
    kite9200
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by JudyKayTee View Post
    Sure, I'll start on it now. How many words do you need?

    Will we split your final grade, will it be all mine, how will that work?

    Can you do this for me? This is boring and hard!!
  • May 28, 2012, 06:04 PM
    Wondergirl
    Hey, Judy, let's you and I do it together and then contact the teacher so we can split the grade!
  • May 28, 2012, 06:04 PM
    Wondergirl
    What is the first poem about? -- two boys who are what and who do what and what do others say about what they do?
  • May 29, 2012, 08:26 AM
    JudyKayTee
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by kite9200 View Post
    Can you do this for me?? this is boring and hard!!!!


    How much time do I have? When is it due?
  • May 29, 2012, 11:40 AM
    kite9200
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by JudyKayTee View Post
    How much time do I have? When is it due?

    Please try to do it today. I really need this done... if you don't mind, could you send the answers to my email? >email removed<
  • May 29, 2012, 12:06 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by kite9200 View Post
    Please try to do it today. I really need this done...if you don't mind, could you send the answers to my email?

    Why can't you do it?
  • May 29, 2012, 12:27 PM
    kite9200
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    Why can't you do it?

    I suck at poetry just please help will you?
  • May 29, 2012, 12:33 PM
    Wondergirl
    You are not to write poetry. You are to write a conversation between two boys.

    Do you understand what the first poem says, what it means?
  • May 29, 2012, 01:39 PM
    kite9200
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    You are not to write poetry. You are to write a conversation between two boys.

    Do you understand what the first poem says, what it means?

    I think I know you are to write a conversation didn't I type that?? Ok and I don't know how to begin the conversation and I am to bring it to life?? Please just help pleaseseeeeeeeeeeeeee
  • May 29, 2012, 02:46 PM
    JudyKayTee
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by kite9200 View Post
    I think I know you are to write a convo didn't I type that????? Ok and I don't know how to begin the conversation and I am to bring it to life???? Please just help pleaseseeeeeeeeeeeeee


    Didn't you type that? Yes, you did.

    If you dropped your attitude and spent half the time you've spent on AMHD working on your assignment it would be done by now.
  • May 29, 2012, 02:48 PM
    Wondergirl
    Locked arm in arm they cross the way,
    The black boy and the white,
    The golden splendor of the day,
    The sable pride of night.

    (Two boys, one black and one white, are friends and hang out together.)

    From lowered blinds the dark folk stare,
    And here the fair folk talk,
    Indignant that these two should dare
    In unison to walk.

    (Adults, both black and white, see these two boys being friends and are very unhappy that they hang out together.)

    Oblivious to look and word
    They pass, and see no wonder
    That lightning brilliant as a sword
    Should blaze the path of thunder.

    (The two boys don't care and ignore the adults' stares and comments that each should stay with his own kind.)
  • May 29, 2012, 02:49 PM
    Wondergirl
    Good so far?
  • May 29, 2012, 02:54 PM
    Wondergirl
    Once, riding in old Baltimore,
    Heart-filled, head-filled with glee,
    I saw a Baltimorean
    Keep looking straight at me.

    (I was very happily visiting Baltimore and noticed a citizen of the city staring at me)

    Now I was eight and very small,
    And he was no whit bigger,
    And so I smiled, but he poked out
    His tongue, and called me “Nigger.”

    (He was a cute little kid, so I smiled at him. Instead of smiling back at me, he stuck out his tongue and called me a racist name.)

    I saw the whole of Baltimore
    From May until December;
    Of all the things that happened there
    That’s all that I remember.

    (I stayed in Baltimore for six months and did many fun and interesting things there, but all I remember about the city is that little kid and his racism and disrespect.)
  • May 29, 2012, 03:10 PM
    kite9200
    I have to check with my teacher and also the conversations have to be 2 paragraphs long... whatever that means.
  • May 29, 2012, 03:11 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by kite9200 View Post
    I have to check with my teacher and also the conversations have to be 2 paragraphs long...whatever that means.

    These aren't the convos yet, but just what the poems mean. Are you okay with the poems' meanings?

    Next, you and I write the convos -- stick around.
  • May 29, 2012, 03:14 PM
    kite9200
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Wondergirl View Post
    These aren't the convos yet, but just what the poems mean. Are you okay with the poems' meanings?

    Next, you and I write the convos -- stick around.

    LOL OK... I'll stick around. I am afraid if I do the convos here and my teacher marks it as plagiarism? I love to work with you from here but how can I tell the teacher that this was me when she checks it in the plagiarism checker?
  • May 29, 2012, 03:17 PM
    Wondergirl
    Summary of the poems:

    Tableau -- Two boys, one black and one white, are friends and hang out together. Adults, both black and white, see these two boys being friends and are very unhappy that they hang out together. The two boys don't care and ignore the adults' stares and comments that each should stay with his own kind.

    Incident -- I was 8 years old and very happily visiting Baltimore and noticed a citizen of the city, a white boy about my age, staring at me. I smiled at him. Instead of smiling back at me, he stuck out his tongue and called me a racist name. I stayed in Baltimore for six months and did many fun and interesting things there, but all I remember about the city is that boy and his racism and disrespect.

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