Chorus

Throwing an idea out there for you...

A place to hear
A place to listen
A place to become
One with Ireland.

Listening and hearing aren't necessarily the same thing. Maybe something could be developed about that?

I like it! This is great :) Thank you so much!

I'm glad that you like it! :)

Please remember that anything can be changed.

As you can see, it can take quite a bit to develop a song. Yours is well into being developed, but will still need further work before it's set to music.

Yes, set to music. I already have a melody in my head in mind for it. I can show you how to develop melodies too. Also, the accompaniments.

Is it okay for you to download programs to your computer?

I hope that you return, liffey!

I was really enjoying that!

I'll be back on here during the next 24 hours at about six hours before the time that you see on this post.

I hope that you have a great day!! :)

Thanks!

Hey, sorry my internet stopped working.. do you really know what music would fit this song?

Have a good day, talk to you later :)

Yes dude ,

Tell me the first 2 lines .

My life journey began
Through the window of my soul
On my way to Ireland
Far north from here I go

Chorus
A place to hear
A place to listen
A place to become
One with Ireland

But the title is "It feels like home to me"

And I would like to have chorus or something with that phrase...

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Originally Posted by liffey

hey, sry my internet stopped working.. do you really know what music would fit this song?

have a good day, talk to you later :)

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Yes. I can come up with melodies and accompaniments instantly. We do need to work on the words and lines some more for them to work the best with a melody though.

By the way, it's not unusual for me to get knocked off the internet on a frequent basis...

Okay... thank you so much for doing this for me!
And I will have to write at least one more verse, or something.

No time right now. Will be back later. I hope that you'll be on!

What time is it where you're at now, please?

Now it's half past 10. (pm)

Here it's about 3:30 P.M. I'll be back on here starting after about 8:30 A.M. your time.

Will you be able to be on here then?

Okay, I got to go!

Here's a few things that I'd like for you to check out in the meantime.

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I hope that you'll be on here later!

Are you going to return to here, liffey? :confused:

I'm hoping that you do! :)

Yes. Of course.
I am here :)

I'm here too! But, it's really late for me right now!

I'm sorry that I didn't notice sooner that you had responded!