Hi!

I'm not at my home currently because I'm having some electrical problems and am staying at another home.

I'll get on this once I'm able to have the resources that I have from my own computer. Am using a friends computer right now.

Thanks!

Hey guys had some free time and jammed with my acoustic and just started singing random words. Came up with something I like. Lol

Chorus

Why can't you see?
How perfect it could be
Are we just friends, today?
How do I tell you... I like you... =P

Ending Chorus/Outro

Why can't you see?
How perfect it could be
Are we just friends, today?
How do I tell you... I like you... =P

I can't pretend,
that you're just my friend
How do I?. How do I? Tell you, I like you =P

Let me know what you guys think, its just the chorus, if I should add more or change something or whateva lol

Hi again, none12345!

I like what you've written and it would fit rhythimically with a melody.

Again, I'll get back to this when I have the resourses from my own computer. Am still having electrical problems at home.

Thank you for your understanding!

Sounds good man... very teenage romance like... :)

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Originally Posted by BlackVY

Sounds good man... very teenage romance like... :)

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lmao... I wanted to get away from that XD sounds so corny lol HELP ME WRITE BRO!! =P

Well dude, in my opinion, it would depend on what kind of sound you are going for. Something more rock? Or Grunge, or Pop? Acoustic? How's the pace? Those things matter, because the change the sound and sometimes the meaning of the words.

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Originally Posted by BlackVY

Well dude, in my opinion, it would depend on what kind of sound you are going for. Something more rock? Or Grunge, or Pop? Acoustic? How's the pace? Those things matter, because the change the sound and sometimes the meaning of the words.

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Something acousticsy would be nice XD

I'll be back here soon, none12345! Have found the ways to correct the difficulties that I've been having, but it's not going to happen immediately. Have been living with friends for the time being.

I'm sorry for the delay!

Thanks!