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  • Mar 18, 2009, 02:34 AM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Shiang View Post
    Dang it's 2am. I've got to get to bed now, since I have an exit exam to take in a few hours.

    Goodnight. c:

    Okay, see you later then. I wish you well with your exam!

    Goodnight!
  • Mar 18, 2009, 06:34 PM
    Shiang

    The wording sounds good :)

    Ooo but I can't read it haha. I made my sister play it for me this morning so I could hear what it sounds like. c:
  • Mar 18, 2009, 10:49 PM
    Clough
    Hi, Shiang!

    So, how did it sound to you? I hope that you liked it!

    Thanks!
  • Mar 19, 2009, 09:34 PM
    Shiang

    It sounded very nice and quick. I liked it very much. C:
  • Mar 19, 2009, 09:41 PM
    Clough

    Okay, thanks!

    I wondered when you would return to here. How did your exam go?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 09:44 PM
    Shiang

    Haha I took a long nap after my audition today. The exam went pretty well? Easier than expected, but too much time left and there was nothing to do. :c
  • Mar 19, 2009, 09:47 PM
    Clough

    What do you mean by "audition", please?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:01 PM
    Shiang

    Oh uhm like, one of the instructors came and graded and also picked who she wanted to have in her dance to preform in late May.
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:05 PM
    Clough

    Do you know if you got a part in it yet?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:10 PM
    Shiang

    I know for sure I didn't because I messed up on one of the turns the second try. So no go for that dance in May. c:
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:18 PM
    Clough

    I'm sorry to hear that you didn't make it! Oh well, you can try again next time!

    Does your sister play a keyboard instrument?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:20 PM
    Shiang

    It's all right though haha. Yup many more tries to go to. :D

    She plays a little bit, like she just started recently. So yes?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:26 PM
    Clough
    Yup, I like your attitude concerning trying! :D We're never through...

    Would you like to see a harder version of your song that has more to it in order for it to sound fuller and more beautiful?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:30 PM
    Shiang

    Haha because if one gives up they go no where. :)

    Sure, that'd be great. :D I'll torture her in the morning trying to teach me it. XD
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:34 PM
    Clough

    Yes, I agree with you! If one gives up, they do go nowhere!

    What I'm going to post is going to be too difficult for your sister to play it with both hands at the same time. One of your other musician friends who has been playing awhile will be able to play.

    Does your sister play on a real piano or some kind of keyboard or electric piano?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:37 PM
    Shiang

    Ah okay. I have found my friend's sister who has played almost as long as the violinist, but she doesn't go to my school. Most people here play Guitar, and only a tiny bit of piano.

    She plays a keyboard I think it's what it's called. It looks like cutting out the key's chunk of the paino, putting it on legs, right?
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:44 PM
    Clough

    Yes, that's a keyboard. The other version of your song is coming. Will just take me a couple of minutes to post it here.
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:47 PM
    Clough
    2 Attachment(s)
    Below, is a more complicated version of your song that you could print and then see if a friend could play it. The melody is the same as the very first one that I posted. This one now has the left-hand accompaniment that I earlier described about on this thread.

    Attachment 17812

    Attachment 17813
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:49 PM
    Clough

    The first two lines of the song are in the first image. Both the second and third line are in the second image.
  • Mar 19, 2009, 10:52 PM
    Shiang

    Oh wooow. So many notes haha.
    A different melody? Like uhm tone? :s

    But yaaay I can't wait to know what it sounds like. :D

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