Have you ever written the lyrics to a song, ironclad04? It would probably be a wise thing to get back on track here as far as your poem is concerned. If not, then we risk this thread being turned into some kind of discussion.

I just wanted to give you a "heads up" on that.

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by Clough

Have you ever written the lyrics to a song, ironclad04? It would probably be a wise thing to get back on track here as far as your poem is concerned. If not, then we risk this thread being turned into some kind of discussion.

I just wanted to give you a "heads up" on that.

Thanks!

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I've tried!? But was not serious then, I want to do it now though because I feel I have potencial in this sort of thing! Thanks for the quote clough!

It isn't all that hard to write lyrics, although it does take some practice (a lot!). I'd be glad to work on that sort of thing with you though, if you would like to.

Thanks!

By the way, your original poem on this thread could be turned into the lyrics for a song quite easily.

I've already got a melody going for it in my head.

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by ironclad04

wow! u guys are something!!! I was just goofing off and found my self all alone!!?? until one day!!

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And from this point on, you will be addicted to something called AskMeHelpDesk.com!
Great poem Iron... I loved it, and isn't that the truth? As Wondergirl said, some poems sound too hokey with all the rhymes, but yours was really smooth and good. Loved it, thank you for sharing it with all of us!