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  • Oct 13, 2008, 10:56 PM
    ArticMonkey

    What is your name?
  • Oct 13, 2008, 10:57 PM
    Clough

    Sam, I forgot to include your chorus as you had originally written it, in my post #37 above. I have now added it.
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:01 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    what is your name?

    It's Craig.

    In your verse #4, you mention babe. Does that mean that this song is about a guy writing about a girl?

    Thanks!
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:02 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea it is

    I like that name :)
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:06 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    yea thats true and thanks for the support but im ok and i like working with you i have me mates and some adult mates that i can go to but thanks for the concern

    Thanks, that's fair. I just wanted to make sure that you were getting the emotional and mental support that you need. I'm glad that you are. I like working with you, too!
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:08 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yay I feel spechial lol any way soz abouot my spelling I have problems when it comes to spelling
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:14 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    yay i feel spechial lol any way soz abouot my spelling i have problems when it comes to spelling

    Your spelling could be improved, and I'm trying to help you with the placement of your words for your song. Sometimes for songs and/or poetry, it's okay to break some of the normal rules for punctuation and spelling as well as grammar. Have you tried using the Spell Check at the bottom of the rectangle where you answer questions?

    Because of the site upgrade, it hasn't been working. I like to use the one at the top right of the rectangle that has the little ABC above it. It works great! Have never had a problem with it. I think that if you click on it, that you will have to download it and it will also be integrated into the browser that you normally use.
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:17 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Thanks any way I have to go now I will be back on around tomorrow same time

    Xx
    Thanks love
    Sam
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:23 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    yea it is

    i like that name :)

    Thanks! If you're a girl, is your name really Sam? I understand if you have to go. It's all right!
  • Oct 13, 2008, 11:39 PM
    Clough

    I'll be back tomorrow also, and looking forward to further developing the song that you are wanting to write. So far, it seems to be going pretty well.

    I'm not sure exactly what time though, because I have to lead a very large number of men in a Guest Night for one of the local barbershop choruses that I direct. We usually go out and have something that's called an "afterglow" after those kinds of events. Usually we go to an restaurant type of place.

    If you have checked out the site that has the Virtual Keyboard on it, I would appreciate knowing what you think about it. Using it in the development of this thread as well as in the development of your song could really come in handy!

    Thanks!
  • Oct 14, 2008, 09:19 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yes I am a girl and my name is samantha elizabeth but sam for short
  • Oct 14, 2008, 09:21 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea I saw the keybord its cool
  • Oct 14, 2008, 09:56 PM
    Clough

    Looks like I just missed you, Sam! I am on now. Just got back home a little while ago.
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:01 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Heyy I'm still on
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:15 PM
    Clough

    It looked like you had logged off. I'm going to enable you to see that I'm also online now.
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:18 PM
    ArticMonkey

    No I hadn't lol I had just closed the browser
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:21 PM
    Clough

    Thanks! So, that's why the site wasn't "seeing" you anymore as being online here.

    I think that I asked you on your other thread something about how much piano you do know how to play. Would you please tell me a little bit about what you do know how to play, please? Knowing that will help me to help you the best concerning your song becoming a song that is set to music!

    Thanks!
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:24 PM
    ArticMonkey

    I can play beginer piano I used to play I played for about 4 months
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:30 PM
    Clough

    Can you play harmonically, three-note chords in your left hand and at the same time play a melody with your right hand?
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:38 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:41 PM
    Clough

    Thanks! What are the notes that are in a "C" chord, please?
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:44 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Umm I don't no chords :S I'm not that's good any more accuaily I suck my teacher can play
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:47 PM
    Clough

    If I asked you to play a C, E and G all at exactly the same time with your left hand, would you be able to do it?
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:48 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:55 PM
    Clough

    Thanks! If I asked you to play the song, "Mary Had a Little Lamb" starting with the middle finger of your right hand, on the "E" above middle "C" and without using any music, would you be able to play that song?
  • Oct 14, 2008, 10:57 PM
    Clough
    C, E and G are the notes that the "C" chord, is composed of by the way, just so you know. That is one of the chords that we could use in your song.
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:02 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Um probably not
    But when I learn sonething I can play it for life I'm a fast learner
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:06 PM
    ArticMonkey

    I can play the c chord than do you have most of the music for it ?
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:12 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    um probly not
    but when i learn sonething i can play it for life im a fast learner

    I believe you when you say that you are a fast learner!

    Do you know the song "Mary Had a Little Lamb?" I'm just trying to figure out how well you can play so that you will be able to play your song, after we finalize what the writing of the words to it is going to be.
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:14 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea I no the song but not very well I neva gew up with child's songs I gew up with hard core songs
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:17 PM
    ArticMonkey

    B bflat b bflat b f a g e

    I can play that
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:17 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    i can play the c chord than do you have most of the music for it ?

    If you mean the music for your song that might be written out, no, not on paper. But, the sound of the music for it comes to me immediately when I see the words that can be put to music. It can be put to actual, printed music later. Writing a song is a process that can sometimes take quite a bit of time.

    Your song will take at least a few more, different chords in order for it to sound the best. If you can play the "C" chord, then that's a good start!

    What I'm trying to get to here, in the immediate future, is for you to be able to play, at least a little bit of your song using that Virtual Keyboard that I showed to you.
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:19 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea
    Like I'm going to start learning piano soon at school
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:21 PM
    Clough
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by ArticMonkey View Post
    yea i no the song but not very well i neva gew up with childs songs i gew up with hard core songs

    If you at least know the song a little bit, I would like for you to open up another browser in addition to this one, if you would, please?

    You can play "Mary Had a Little Lamb" right away! I will show you how to do that!
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:22 PM
    ArticMonkey

    OK done
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:26 PM
    Clough

    Please open up the following link in the other browser.

    VIRTUAL KEYBOARD - PIANO
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:27 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Done
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:36 PM
    Clough

    All the notes that we are going to use for "Mary Had a Little Lamb" will be between the two C's on the keyboard.

    Below, are the notes to "Mary Had a Little Lamb", first verse. Please play it and let me know how it goes.

    E, D, C, D, E, E, E,
    D, D, D, E, G, G,
    E, D, C, D, E, E, E, E,
    D, D, E, D, C
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:37 PM
    Clough
    The words to those same notes are as follows:

    Mary had a little lamb,
    Little lamb, little lamb.
    Mary had a little lamb,
    It's fleece was white as snow.
  • Oct 14, 2008, 11:38 PM
    ArticMonkey

    Yea I done it that was easy

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