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  • Feb 6, 2013, 03:57 PM
    andreyveritas
    Yes, this is my thesis statement. I have a bit trouble wording it. I'm trying to say that even though there's always a fight, an a conflicts in the family its better to have them close than to not knowing them at all..
  • Feb 6, 2013, 04:01 PM
    Wondergirl
    Hmmm, don't mention conflicts or refer to it in any way. You wanted your family back together to be a real family again, not one separated by countries and half a world. Let me think. (Nice job otherwise, by the way!)

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