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  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:06 PM
    Wondergirl
    FINAL --

    I knew that this rank wasn't going to get me the major I wanted, and I was right. I was invited to pursue bio-chemical engineering at IIT-Varanasi.

    I was pretty depressed. I wanted to give it another try because I wanted my path to be chosen by me, not by fate. But is this a right decision? I wondered. Am I rightly judging my ability? To this day, I still weigh the ethical dilemma of my career decision.

    I have come to realize that important decisions in life are often difficult to make. I'm confident that I’ve made a good one this time--and, remembering this experience, I will make more good ones in the future. Waiting a whole year for “my moment” has also given me patience and an increased tenacity that I will carry forward into other areas of my life.
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:09 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    Yes that is final and will not be changed.

    By the way, how can I spread your reputation now?
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:12 PM
    Wondergirl
    Thank you, but no need. Just tell all your friends about us. And send me a dozen samosas and some mango chutney. ;)
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:15 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    Hahaha! You know something, I have, already, told a friend about you. I've seen your rescue missions on this site many times!
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:21 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Abhimanyu Pudi View Post
    Hahaha!! You know something, I have, already, told a friend about you. I've seen your rescue missions on this site many times!!

    Rescue missions?
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:24 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    Correcting grammar and you did give an excellent explanation on a metaphor few years ago. I guess.
    Quote:

    He is switzerland


    Do you remember?
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:26 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Abhimanyu Pudi View Post
    Correcting grammar and you did give an excellent explanation on a metaphor few years ago. i guess.

    Do you remember?

    Nope. I don't. I like to edit people's writing (and my own).
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:29 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    Now I feel like showing you my whole essay but is it okay if I post it here? Firstly, are you interested in editing it?
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:32 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    I made my first post asking to correct my sentence in education category and I tried to get you into it, but I failed. This time, expecting you, I've posted it in writing section.
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:33 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Abhimanyu Pudi View Post
    Now I feel like showing you my whole essay but is it okay if I post it here? Firstly, are you interested in editing it?

    Yes, you can post it here, or maybe safer to PM it to me (so not plagiarized). May I edit it in the morning? It's 1:30 a.m. here now and I should go to bed.

    I just looked up the Switzerland metaphor -- back in September 2008!! I can't escape my history!
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:36 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    There you go. You must be smiling when you looked at it now.

    Yes, sure. I'll be waiting and GOOD NIGHT
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:36 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Abhimanyu Pudi View Post
    I made my first post asking to correct my sentence in education category and i tried to get you into it, but I failed. This time, expecting you, I've posted it in writing section.

    Universities & Colleges is not one of my boards, but Writing is, so I check it several times a day and have it on my virtual bulletin board. I saw your plea for help when I went looking for Switzerland.
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:38 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Abhimanyu Pudi View Post
    There you go. You must be smiling when you looked at it now.

    Yes, sure. I'll be waiting and GOOD NIGHT

    Have a good day. See you in a while. (We're 10 hrs. apart. I'll be here again around 9 a.m. my time)
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:38 PM
    Abhimanyu Pudi
    And just a sec. What is PM?

    Its okay, lets come back tomorrow morning(morning to you, though)
  • Oct 2, 2012, 11:40 PM
    Wondergirl
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Abhimanyu Pudi View Post
    And just a sec. What is PM?

    Its okay, lets come back tomorrow morning(morning to you, though)

    PM = Private Message.

    Click on my name by my avatar and a window will open showing a link to the PM screen.

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