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  • Jun 29, 2010, 11:11 AM
    Kitkat22
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Just Dahlia View Post
    I like it! Send away:D

    Gosh I could give you a thousand funny things that kids say.


    Your story is great.:)
  • Jun 29, 2010, 11:20 AM
    albear

    Great piece Alty :)

    After reading that I should deffinetly rethink weather I want kids or not :D
  • Jun 29, 2010, 11:22 AM
    Alty
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by albear View Post
    great piece Alty :)

    after reading that i should deffinetly rethink weather i want kids or not :D

    LOL! It wasn't meant to dissuade anyone from reproducing. ;)

    Kids are great Bear. There are times when I'd sell them to the gypsies for 5 cents a piece, but most of the time they're keepers. :cool:

    Besides, when they get older they can do most of the chores I hate doing, like mowing the lawn, shoveling the snow, cooking, cleaning. Pretty much everything. ;)
  • Jun 29, 2010, 11:26 AM
    Kitkat22
    Quote:

    Originally Posted by Altenweg View Post
    LOL! It wasn't meant to dissuade anyone from reproducing. ;)

    Kids are great Bear. There are times when I'd sell them to the gypsies for 5 cents a piece, but most of the time they're keepers. :cool:

    Besides, when they get older they can do most of the chores I hate doing, like mowing the lawn, shoveling the snow, cooking, cleaning. Pretty much everything. ;)





    Kids are great and I wouldn't trade mine for a billion dollars. When they
    Were young they were so sweet I wanted to just eat them up. When they became teens there were times I wish I had..
  • Jul 17, 2010, 08:36 PM
    giderdone

    That's a great story. Reminds me of my little guy when I took him to a family reunion supper and he puked down the front of my new suit.
    Got the craziest looks when him and I started laughing togather.
  • Jul 17, 2010, 08:46 PM
    EmoPrincess

    Alty-mommy, I love it

    All the mistakes have been pointed out I think?
  • Jul 17, 2010, 09:31 PM
    Just Dahlia

    Have you heard anything yet?
  • Jul 18, 2010, 04:11 AM
    albear

    Did you even enter it?

    But as JD said, any replies yet?

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