Well, thank you to you guys for helping lol. I'm glad I changed it. You were all helpful

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Originally Posted by arturdo968

well, thank you to you guys for helping lol. i'm glad i changed it. you were all helpful

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You ADDED a comma, right?

Yess lol. It's going to be sent out tomorrow

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Originally Posted by arturdo968

yess lol. it's going to be sent out tomorrow

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And you kept the lovely metaphor?

of course =].
I worked hard to think of a good metaphor for my topic, so there was no way I was going to take it out lol

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Originally Posted by Wondergirl

It has nothing to do with citizenship. Reread my previous post.

I am an American = I am a citizen of the United States.

I am America = I embody all that the United States stands for.

"I am America" or "He is Switzerland" is lofty rhetoric, the kind of writing Brown University will love to see in an admission essay.

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Hey Wondergirl, I need your help. Your explanation on this metaphor is so good, in fact amazing.
I have a question posted here. Please help

https://www.askmehelpdesk.com/universities-colleges/improved-form-these-sentences-705891.html#post3285577