Its funny I show some nurse and co workers at work, and everyone is like "who wrote this?" I say me, they are like "nu uhn! I thought it was written by by someone!" lol I'm glad everyone likes it ^^

No my brother plays guitar REALLY well and can read music, I want to learn the keyboard but haven't gone to any classes yet. And I don't mind if you change it to fit, I figured you would need to.

Okay, I can see that Delow84 is searching topics on this site right now. As I also indicated to you, Wondergirl, I am home sitting and dog sitting for some folks this week. Am also totally snowed in and can't drive anywhere. So, I don't have all of the resources that I would normally have with me right now. (I think that I hear a plow right now! I hope! I hope!)

So, it will take me a couple of days to get to this. Also, right now I am expecting a phone call.

Okay, I can see that you beat me Delow84! But, I do need to take a phone call right now. I will respond to you sometime in the very near future.

Sounds like a plan :) I appreciate everyone's feedback and help very much

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no my brother plays guitar REALLY well and can read music, i want to learn the keyboard but havnt gone to any classes yet. And I dont mind if you change it to fit, i figured you would need to.

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Okay, thanks! Then we're on!

Wow... I'm reading the beginnings of a Platinum album!

You guys are da bomb!

Oh, I sing... ;)

Lol, man I never would have thought people would like that poem so much, but I'm glad you all do. It would be really cool to hear something I wrote and created in musical form.

Darlin, it's a beautiful portrayal of sincere, real love...

You have captured its essence - to truly describe love is hard to do... but you have... very well.

It's funny I started writing in middle school cause I guess I heard somewhere that the girls love poems lol... and I would always try and write a 'love poem' but every time I did, as sweet as they might have been, they were never what I was trying for.

imo I like this one, especially with the edits, it fits the mood and feeling I was going for. I't makes me feel proud when I will show people the poem (and they are assuming someone else wrote it) and I will watch their faces, when I see them smile or other little facial expressions... this poem did what I wanted it to.

:) yay me