I am writing an essay on edgar allan poe on his short stories and poems I had to choose an element which is his moods and need to argue whether poe is more successful in his use of it in either the poetry or the short stories? Any ideas on what I should write in my first paragraph?

Do I understand this correctly? You want compare Poe's short stores to his poetry as to which style better expresses moods?

If so, which short stories and poems do you plan to use as examples?

Your first paragraph is your introduction and thesis statement. The rest of the paragraphs that follow will support your thesis. At the end will be a conclusion paragraph.

I am going to talk about the raven and tell tales heart. But I don't know what I need to talk about in the first paragraph in my essay. I am talking about how poetry shows less mood than in his short stories and I need to tell why.. its like a compare and contrast between one poem and one short story.

"The Raven" gives a lot of feeling of mood, so not sure that poem is a good choice. "The Bells" with its emphasis on onomatopoeia might be better.

Tell me why you think it's a good choice. (This will help me help you with a first paragraph.) And tell me briefly why you think that short story offers more mood.

Yeah that is true what if I compare the tell tale heart with annabel lee?

A poem about the death of a beautiful woman? You think there's no mood going on there??

And so far in my into paragraph I have.. edgar allan poe, an american author, poet, editor and literart critic was famous for his gothic horror writing and their unusual endings.( I saw online in his biography) He brings edge and darkness into his writings that readers don't see often.

Can you choose something instead of mood?

You can choose mood morality denouement.. etc

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and so far in my into paragraph i have.. edgar allan poe, an american author, poet, editor and literart critic was famous for his gothic horror writing and their unusual endings.( i saw online in his biography) He brings edge and darkness into his writings that readers dont see often.

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That kills off your entire thesis idea of mood.

Please list all the elements you are allowed to choose from.

It says in our anthology we have both poems and short stories by edgar allan poe. Choose an element on which to focus, like mood, morality, denouement, etc. and argue whether poe is more successful in his use of it in either the poetry or short stories.. and the two poems we can choose from are the raven or the annabel lee. The two short stories we can choose from are the tell tale heart or the cask of amontillado... honestly I don't know how to write this I suck at poetry..

How about TERROR as an element? Poe does a fantastic job creating terror in his prose, as he builds tension as he develops his stories, but much less often does terror show up in his poetry where we instead find feelings such as grief and sadness.

All right then. Write about how the "mood" that he strikes in "Tell-Tale Heart" is terror, but doesn't go there in "Annabel Lee" (different mood entirely).

Okay that would be good.. but on which short story and poem would be good to compare and which one has more terror?

I had posted: All right then. Write about how the "mood" that he strikes in "Tell-Tale Heart" is terror, but doesn't go there in "Annabel Lee" (different mood entirely).

You can't say he wasn't successful in establishing mood. He simply established two different moods.

Now the problem for your essay is why and how.

His stories (prose) tend to have terror in them because he can build up feelings of terror in the reader as he writes, can add descriptive adverbs and adjectives in the narrative (storytelling), and even dialogue (conversations) can have terror in them.

His poetry is usually fairly short and very much to the point (no big build-up) and often gives the feelings of loss and sadness and grieving.

Okay so I should write about the tell tale heart and annabel lee? And compare how/

You said you want to compare moods, so compare the horror in "Tell-Tale Heart" with the sadness in "Annabel Lee." Describe why each style of writing is best suited for the moods he evoked. Describe how he produced those emotions/moods.

Now, write an Intro paragraph and put into that paragraph a thesis statement (what you plan to prove with the rest of the essay).

Okay I understand.. but am I supposed to put in my intro? Do I talk about who edgar allan poe is..

Did your class talk about this AT ALL? Have you ever written an essay before and an introductory paragraph and a thesis statement?

I am not sure how to help without writing the thing for you.

Whatever you write about Poe should be very brief. This isn't a biography.

Put something together -- a few sentences -- and I will tweak, if necessary.

Haha okay I will try its because I honestly suck at writing.. and I failed my last essay so I need to do good on this one.

May I ask.. who are you anyway haha?

Writers use many techniques to make their writing appeal to the reader's artistic senses. A master of this was Edgar Allan Poe. In the short story "The Tell-Tale Heart," he writes to the reader's senses in order to orchestrate feelings of suspense and fear. In his last work, a poem called "Annabel Lee," he instead paints a picture of his almost bizarre attachment to a beloved woman whose loss he mourned. Although both of these have an overarching mood of insanity, one of them is more successful at showing that.

Are u like a person who writes essays for people? Like u know those websites where they charge to write essays/

Yes or no? Just wondering..

Sorry I disappeared. I had to reboot my computer. It's old and cranky.

I was a college English major, have loved American and English lit all my life, was a teacher, became a career librarian, have written and gotten books published the old-fashioned way, am a counselor, and here I am, just to help you!

No, I don't write those essays for sale. I'm too smart to do that (most of them suck).

And, by the way, don't use that paragraph I wrote or your teacher will think you plagiarized it from somewhere. I was just trying to show you what I meant.

Haha why can't I use that paragraph? Does it sound too good or what?

It doesn't quite sound like you, does it.

Now, YOU write one like that.

What grade are you in and where (generally) do you live? (I'm near Chicago.)

Haha no but I don't even have anything!. and its my first semester in college.

If you used my paragraph, where would you go with the essay? How would you prove the thesis?

Well wouldn't I just talk about how one of them is more successful than the other one with examples/

Yes, and your evidence and examples would be..

That the short stories have more mood and insanity in it... and put examples from the stories and poem.

You said you are to use ONE short story, and you wanted "Tell-Tale Heart," so I put only that one that in the intro paragraph. We cannot use any other short stories in the body of the essay -- only that one.

What examples to compare and contrast the short story with the poem you selected?

Yes I know I am going to compare the tell tale heart and annabel lee and show which one is more successful correct?

Yes, but HOW??

I don't know..

When is this due?