There is this guy that I love but we live in differnent states oky you know how you parents said not to talk to anyone online that you don't no well I didn't listin and I meat him on this website name imvu and we talk everyday and we understand each other and stuff he is not like any of the other jerks I no he said he loves me and looks don't matter and I love him to we both want go out but the distance is stoping us because we both don't want date online because what if it dose not work out with us and then I lose a good guy frind and a lover too so what shuld I do.

You should turn the computer off and meet a real live person.

I do actully a lot only onec in a couple of days I go on the computer. I just need help shuld I stop talking to him or countine talking to him so I can have a frind because its not like we will go out we live in two sparte worlds oky

How are are you and this guy?

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How are are you and this guy?

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Um 14 and 15 I no your going to say we don't no what love is

No, I'm not. Your spelling is so bad, I figure you are about 7 or 8. And, by the way, texting is not allowed on this site.

What about filling your time this summer by reading books, playing games outdoors, doing chores for your mom, putting together jigsaw puzzles, and pulling weeds in the yard instead of sitting immobile in a stuffy house in front of a computer?

Your saying I should just forget about him

Will I be helping you if I give you full permission to be on the computer and chat with guys who may be, in reality, older men looking for sweet, young girls to have some fun with?

You have absolutely NO idea whom you are talking with on the Internet. I have been surfing and chatting and a member of various Internet communities since 1998. Ask me anything.

Oky I understand that. But what if he is not one those guys. And to me he seems like he is my age because of the way we talk so is he or not

He could be this guy , scary isn't it ;)









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oky I understand that. But what if he is not one those guys. And to me he seems like he is my age because of the way we talk so is he or not

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Older men who hang out on youth and chat websites are very good at sounding like they are your age and have similar interests to yours. Yes, your Internet "friend" may be who he says he is, but maybe he isn't. Along the way, you will want to reveal personal information about yourself and where you live, and that might be a very dangerous thing to do.

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I only go on the computer on sundays and fridays

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Only on Sundays and Fridays.

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we talk everyday

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Okay. Which is it -- twice a week or every day? Lying to us doesn't help your cause.

You see how easy it is to lie online. Your "friend" may be doing the same thing to you.

Um oky I see we talk twice a week now before it use to be everyday but we stop


Um oky is there any questions I can ask him to see if he is lying to me or anything and if he is my age or what or no

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um oky is there any questions i can ask him to see if he is lieing to me or anything and if he is my age or what or no

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Nope! There is nothing you can do to find out the truth. I suggest you listen to what your mother told you and obey her.

Oky thanks for your help

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um oky is there any questions i can ask him to see if he is lieing to me or anything and if he is my age or what or no

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Seriously why even bother. The fact is there are thousands upon thousands of internet stalkers all over the world. This guy could even be an old pervert living near you and spying on you.

Why not just go out with friends and your bound to meet a nice available guy when the time is right.

Oky

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oky

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(It's spelled "okay.")

Are there other kids your age living near you or opportunities to get together with others during the summer through your church or school?

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Is that you, M? LOL! :p

Hi, aleeyafgy!

If you click on my name, you can go and read my profile, if you would like to. Everything in my profile is verifiable and true. That means that people can know that I am who I say that I am.

Some of us who are members on this site, have spoken with each other on the phone as well as gone to visit each other in person.

Even at my age, I wouldn't even consider calling someone on the phone that I met online, let alone going to visit them, unless I was absolutely sure of who and what they were.

Thanks!

My love for you is so hard to describe but I want you to know
How I really feel about you I think it's time you should know.
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
To the sound of your breath on my neck,
The warmth of your lips on my cheek,
The touch of your fingers on my skin,
And the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
With anyone other than you.

When you tell me you love me I get this kind of feeling
That I never got with any other guy that I know.
That feeling is like so hard to describe but I will try
For you, it's like butterflies in my stomach flying all over
In my stomach and then this big smile comes on my face just
To know that you love me too and you care for me.
I know you're not by my side but I feel like you are when we talk
And the way I talk to you it's like I can tell you anything hoping that
You will understand and you that's one thing I love abut you if need
Help with something you try your best to help and plus you actually
Listening to me not like all the other guys I know.
Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a song,
Love is what I feel for you,
Every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is a great emotion,
That keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart,
My body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving,
Like a love I can't control,
So remember when I first started to talk to you,
I love you with all my heart,
And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start.
That's how my love is but there is more and more feels every
Day that I know you.


I wrote this for a guy that I love can you guys tell me if I am missing anything or it is good.

Yes It's a nice poem, I would go back and change the u though to you...

JMO

I see you've already changed it.

You could also try breaking it down into smaller sections.

Try to keep each section about same amount of lines..

There are also a couple of typos you need to correct, but overall it's a good poem.

Okay thanks

A few typos still, another "u" and "abut", maybe punctuation to accentuate the meaning...

And the way I talk to you it's like I can tell you anything hoping that
You will understand and you that's one thing I love about you if need
Help with something you try your best to help and plus you actually
Listening to me not like all the other guys I know.

I'm not a native english speaker so maybe I'm wrong (we use commas a lot in french but you guys don't seem to like it, hehe) but something seems weird to me here, especially with time concordance - this, if you want to follow the rules, of course. I underlined where I think it sounds unusual, others may help better but you might want to take a look...

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My love for you is so hard to describe but I want you to know
How I really feel about you I think it's time u should know.
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
and the feel of your heart beating with mine...
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

When you tell me you love me I get this kind of feeling
That I never got with any other guy that I know.
That feeling is like so hard to describe but I will try
For you, it's like butterflies in my stomach flying all over
In my stomach and then this big smile comes on my face just
To know that you love me too and you care for me.
I know you're not by my side but I feel like you are when we talk
And the way I talk to you it's like I can tell you anything hoping that
You will understand and you that's one thing I love abut you if need
Help with something you try your best to help and plus you actually
Listening to me not like all the other guys I know.
Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a song,
Love is what I feel for you,
Each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is a great emotion,
That keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart,
My body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving,
Like a love I can't control,
So remember when I first started to talk to you,
I love you with all my heart,
And I have poured my entire soul into you,
Right from the very start.
That's how my love is but there is more and more feels every
Day that I know you.


i wrote this for a guy that i love can you guys tell me if i am missing anything or it is good.

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OK, I'm going with get rid of that 1st 'like' it doesn't seem necessary. Punctuation is a must because the second part was harder to read than the first.
It is however very beautiful and no matter what, he will understand what you are saying:)

If it helps I could copy and paste it and make the alterations needed, but that's got to be your choice, I am merely offering constructive crticism, but still think overall its good..

Let me know if you would like me to do as is offered here Please.

Ive made a few alterations for you, if you don't like them you don't have to take any notice of them,this is how I would lay it out.

As stated you can ignore all changes I have made..


You need to give it a title.

My love for you is so hard to describe however;
I want you to know how I really feel about you
I think it's time you should know
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
To the sound of your breath on my neck,
The warmth of your lips on my cheek,
The touch of your fingers on my skin,
The feel of your heart beating with mine,
Knowing that I could never find that feeling
With anyone other than you.

When you tell me you love me I get this feeling
I never felt with any other guy that Ive known
That feeling is so hard to describe,
I will try though for you;
It's like butterflies in my stomach flying all over it,
Then this big smile comes across my face
Just knowing that you love me, that you care for me too,
I know you're not by my side but it feels like you are when we talk
The way I can talk to you it's like I can tell you anything
That you will understand, another thing I love about you
If I need help with something you try your best to help
You actually listen to me unlike other guys Ive known.

Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a song,
Love is what I feel for you, every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is a great emotion, that keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart, my body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving you, it's a love I can't control,
From when I first started to talk to you,
Ive loved you with all my heart,
I have poured my entire soul into you, right from the very start,
This is how my love is but there is much more
It feels every day that I know you more...

This is a rough draft.

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you need to give it a title.

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I agree with this:)

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Ive made a few alterations for you, if you dont like them you dont have to take any notice of them,this is how I would lay it out.

As stated you can ignore all changes I have made..


you need to give it a title.

My love for you is so hard to describe however;
I want you to know how I really feel about you
I think it's time you should know
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
the feel of your heart beating with mine,
knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

When you tell me you love me I get this feeling
I never felt with any other guy that Ive known
that feeling is so hard to describe,
I will try though for you;
it's like butterflies in my stomach flying all over it,
then this big smile comes across my face
just knowing that you love me, that you care for me too,
I know you're not by my side but it feels like you are when we talk
the way I can talk to you it's like I can tell you anything
that you will understand, another thing I love about you
if I need help with something you try your best to help
you actually listen to me unlike other guys Ive known.

Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a song,
Love is what I feel for you, each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is a great emotion, that keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart, my body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving you, its a love I can't control,
from when I first started to talk to you,
Ive loved you with all my heart,
I have poured my entire soul into you, right from the very start,
this is how my love is but there is much more
it feels every day that I know you more...

this is a rough draft.

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That was great:D and now I am in love with 'positiveparent', because when I read the poem he/she talked to me:rolleyes:
::kisses::;)

LOL Just Dahlia Im female and thank you for the comments.

To the OP, is this poem for the person mentioned in your first post, the one who lives in a different state? If so have you found out his age yet, do you communicate in any other way, i.e. phone, email,

It won't hurt to send him your poem, however I would advise you not to get too into a person you've only interacted with online, others have already warned you of the dangers online relationships can have.

However don't give out too much of your personal details, don't tell him your address, or school or anything connected to where you live, ask him about himself, and make a note of what his answers are, then wait a week or 2 and ask him again, check his answers with first replies.

You say he seems to be your age, did you know predators act as if they're the same age as you they find out the latest trends and slang kids are using in order to pretend they're the same age.

Be very very careful, don't ever agree to meet him alone, its quite possible this person could be lying to you, however he could be genuine, you'll need to discreetly find out. Just be very careful of what you disclose about yourself and your family.

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Ive made a few alterations for you, if you dont like them you dont have to take any notice of them,this is how I would lay it out.

As stated you can ignore all changes I have made..


you need to give it a title.

My love for you is so hard to describe however;
I want you to know how I really feel about you
I think it's time you should know
If I could have just one wish,
I would wish to wake up everyday
to the sound of your breath on my neck,
the warmth of your lips on my cheek,
the touch of your fingers on my skin,
the feel of your heart beating with mine,
knowing that I could never find that feeling
with anyone other than you.

When you tell me you love me I get this feeling
I never felt with any other guy that Ive known
that feeling is so hard to describe,
I will try though for you;
it's like butterflies in my stomach flying all over it,
then this big smile comes across my face
just knowing that you love me, that you care for me too,
I know you're not by my side but it feels like you are when we talk
the way I can talk to you it's like I can tell you anything
that you will understand, another thing I love about you
if I need help with something you try your best to help
you actually listen to me unlike other guys Ive known.

Love is the greatest feeling,
Love is like a song,
Love is what I feel for you, each and every day,
Love is like a smile,
Love is a great emotion, that keeps us going strong,
I love you with my heart, my body and my soul,
I love the way I keep loving you, its a love I can't control,
from when I first started to talk to you,
Ive loved you with all my heart,
I have poured my entire soul into you, right from the very start,
this is how my love is but there is much more
it feels every day that I know you more...

this is a rough draft.

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Suggestions for a title:

Long Distance Love *
My Online Love
Stateside Love

* is my preference...

Wow thanks for helping me out I love the way you did it the way you did it , I have learn a new way and I will keep doing what you do.

Thank You and Im happy to help you anytime you need someone.

I hope the b/f likes the poem.

Also please let me know what you decide to name the poem.

Okay I hope he likes it too. I was thinking of naming it MY LOVE FOR YOU, Or do you have better if you can help with that too.

Your choice for a title is fine.

I did make a few suggestions these are my suggestions.

Suggestions for a title:

Long Distance Love *
My Online Love
Stateside Love

* is my preference...

I have sent you a PM message about this, you might want to check that.

Oh I like Long Distance Love thanks.

I have a Question Do you think long distance relationship work out even if we can't see each other or anything. Because we are young. I am only 15. And he is too.

I understand that. But this is someone elsa that I no over 4 Years he use to live her but he moved. When everyone told me all those things I stop talking to the other guy because I don't want get hurt or anything.