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    Jun 25, 2012, 12:35 PM
    What do think of this poem
    The Amber Witch
    By LC

    She won’t let you go; you have a weakness for her;
    She’s deeply satisfying, her embrace like a vise
    And she’ll stay with you forever if you let her
    In your heart, in your mind, in your soul

    When you’re sad, she makes you smile
    When you’re lonely, she fills a void
    When you’re fragile she makes you strong
    At least that’s what you think and I’m jealous of her magic.

    I think she’s wicked; the Jezebel
    Her amber fingers caressing you from the inside
    I can feel her laughing at me with her crafty grin.
    I can’t compete with her sorcery; her super powers.
    She’s a part of you, so you’ll most likely ignore me.

    If you push her away, she’ll creep though memories
    Letting you miss her taste, her touch, her clever hold
    And when you want her to come back
    She’ll be there; you won’t have to ask her twice.

    Do you want to give her up; sever the tie, break the spell?
    Do you want her to vanish from your world?
    I’m the weaker one; why not just ask me to leave,
    Because there’s a possibility you love her more anyway.
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    Jun 25, 2012, 12:59 PM
    Is this to be explicated for homework?
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    Jun 29, 2012, 08:45 AM
    I like the flow of it... reminds me of the proverbial "dream lover" that never quite equals the reality before you. Excellent! Keep up the good work!
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