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    Mar 12, 2012, 04:40 PM
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    I remember when I a baby,
    I barely talks.
    I remember when I was learning how to walk,
    Fell two times on the same spot.

    I remember when supper time comes,
    Always took me more than an hour to finish.
    I remember when the first day of school,
    I cried so much because I missed mom and dad.

    I remember when Kelly and I were alone,
    We got in trouble because we played with fire.
    I remember when we doing dishes,
    Forgot to turn off the tape.

    I remember all those great things that happened when I was young.
    It has become nothing but memory,
    The ones that I will remember within my life.
    That was my childhood.
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    Mar 12, 2012, 05:29 PM
    I remembered when I was a child,
    I barely talked.
    I remembered when I was learning to walk,
    Fell two times on the same spot.

    I remember the first day of school,
    I cried so much because I missed mom and dad.
    I remember when supper time comes,
    Always take me more than an hour to finish.

    I remembered when Kelly and I were alone,
    We got into trouble because we played with fire.
    I remembered when we were doing the dishes,
    The tape was on for an hour.

    I remember all those delightful things that happened when I was young.
    It has become nothing but memories,
    But all the joyful times will live on within me.
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    Mar 12, 2012, 05:32 PM
    I remembered when I was a baby,
    I barely talked.
    I remembered when I was learning to walk,
    Fell two times on the same spot.

    I remembered the first day of school,
    I cried so much because I missed mom and dad.
    I remembered when supper time comes,
    Always take me more than an hour to finish.

    I remembered when Kelly and I were alone,
    We got into trouble because we played with fire.
    I remembered when we were doing the dishes,
    The tape was on for an hour.

    I remember all those delightful things that happened when I was young.
    It has become nothing but memories,
    But all the joyful times will live on within me.

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