[Stepdancer21]

Hi Everyone. I am a teenage girl who has been in love with the same boy... forever. I do not know why, but it has always been him. I am just an ordinary girl. I think about him every minute of the day. At school, I am very shy, so he does not know exactly who I am, because at home I am fun. Over the past years we have done swimming together, but he doesn't know he means so much to me.
With the help of many people on this website, we were able to come up with a few verses.
When I go to bed, I think of you,
Your face is the only thing that gets me through.
I dream of the things that we could be,
I only wish that you could see.

I've loved you for what feels like forever,
You just don't know the other side of me.
Oh... how I wish that we could be.
I'm not so shy as to what it seems.

I'm a normal girl who's now in love,
I dance, I sing, I laugh and hug
Your face, your voice, your smile and laugh,
I fell in love.. oh so damn fast!

My love for you is far above,
Anything you could dream of.
On my mind every minute of the day
I only wish that you would say...

I love you too!

I was wondering if you could help me try to finish the song. I am going to keep adding new verses everyday, so I will keep you posted.
Thanks so much to whoever contributes! It really means a lot!

[ITstudent2006]

Give m more information and I can continue working on this but like I said, for this to feel genuine you need to put I effort too.

Can you sing? Are you singing this to him? What genre do you fall under when you sing?

You have to base a song off the capabilities of the singer, the genre, the vocal capacity, etc...

[ITstudent2006]

Most songs have choruses, which refresh the following verse or reiterate the meaning behind a song. Are you interested in a chorus?

[Stepdancer21]

Hi there. Yes I am a singer (I have a high range).
I have came up with a few more lines, and I will post them later on. I am thinking of a chorus to though.
But no, I am just a shy girl who needs to find the words out on paper.