Ask Experts Questions for FREE Help !
Ask
    tmfbdwilson's Avatar
    tmfbdwilson Posts: 1, Reputation: 1
    New Member
     
    #1

    Oct 22, 2009, 09:08 AM
    Writing a Thesis Statement.
    I need help writing a thesis statement for my paper below is my first paragraph but I am just not sure on how to write a thesis statement? Please help!!

    The Human Body is very interesting to me. It does so many things that you would not think of every day. I am an EMT and I became an EMT because the body interest me so much. I hope to further my education past this class to become an RN one day. As you sit here and read this paper your body has made new cells and your nails have grown a centimeter. You do not even realize that your is doing all this, it just does. In order for us to stay alive we breath its not a choice of ours; our body just does it.
    WiseOldUnicorn's Avatar
    WiseOldUnicorn Posts: 4, Reputation: 1
    -
     
    #2

    Oct 27, 2009, 11:50 PM

    Well, a thesis statement is supposed to summarize the purpose of your paper; it states whatever the main idea that you're trying to express is. So going by your first paragraph, for instance, you might want to have a thesis statement something like:

    The human body is a fascinating creation that does many things every day that we are completely unaware of.

Not your question? Ask your question View similar questions

 

Question Tools Search this Question
Search this Question:

Advanced Search

Add your answer here.


Check out some similar questions!

Writing a thesis statement [ 1 Answers ]

I have to write a thesis statement for a narrative paper that I am writing. My topic is about how I feel that I became a better parent after my divorce. This is the first thesis statement that I have to write for college. This is what I am thinking of using for my thesis statement-After my divorce...

Difficulty in starting writing my Ph.D. Thesis [ 17 Answers ]

I have been studying my Ph.D. in chemistry for five and a half years. I got married on the second year and had the baby on the thirds year and lost my mom after having the baby. The project was troublesome and I needed to have technical skills to solve the technical problems so that I could use a...

Writing thesis paper. [ 3 Answers ]

Hello and I am new member,just trying to see if someone could help me put together a good thesis for outsourcing jobs in the foreign countries,and I am not talking about you give me answe I am just trying to get a little help,I need good website that give me good example and explantion on my...

Writing a thesis statement [ 3 Answers ]

It is about the crucible by Arthur Miller. A REPORT about on of the themes Reputation. Give me a guide about how to right the thesis statement about it, or if you can give me an idea on what to wright

Writing a thesis statement [ 2 Answers ]

It about writing a report about a theme of the book which is repuation.the way some character showed that their reputation meant a lot to them.for example on pg12 about abigail


View more questions Search