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Jun 6, 2009, 07:25 PM
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Try solving this paragraph!
Ironclad here people, got something good for u guys to work on, takes some good skills!
How quickly can you find out what is unusual about this paragraph? It looks so ordinary that you would think nothing was wrong with it at all, and in fact nothing is wrong with it. But it is unusual. Why? If u study it, and think about it, you may find out, but I will not assist you in any way. You must do this without coaching. No doubt, if you work on it for half an hour it will dawn on you... who knows?? Now try your brain skills on this!
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Jun 6, 2009, 07:28 PM
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No letter "e" in it.
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Jun 6, 2009, 07:38 PM
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Originally Posted by ironclad04
Ironclad here people, got something good for u guys to work on, takes some good skills!
How quickly can you find out what is unusual about this paragraph? It looks so ordinary that you would think nothing was wrong with it at all, and in fact nothing is wrong with it. But it is unusual. Why? If u study it, and think about it, you may find out, but i will not assist you in any way. You must do this without coaching. No doubt, if you work on it for half an hour it will dawn on you.... who knows??? Now try your brain skills on this!
The red show some errors.
I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
Sarah
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Jun 6, 2009, 07:39 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
No letter "e" in it.
Wow! Pretty good smarty pants! Lol
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Jun 6, 2009, 07:40 PM
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Originally Posted by mudweiser
The red show some errors.
I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
Sarah
I know, my bad!?
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Jun 6, 2009, 07:44 PM
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Originally Posted by mudweiser
I also believe there is a comma splice in your paragraph.
No comma splice. And he needs a few more commas here and there.
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Jun 7, 2009, 01:21 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
No letter "e" in it.
I thought it was when he used a "u" to say "you", I would have never gotten that there were no e's in it! Great job!
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Jun 7, 2009, 07:29 PM
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Originally Posted by startover22
I thought it was when he used a "u" to say "you", I would have never gotten that there were no e's in it! Great job!
Thanks guys! Its just an open humor type thing I did in school long time ago, I almost took poetry too! But thanks for the feedback!
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Jobs & Parenting Expert
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Jun 7, 2009, 07:34 PM
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Originally Posted by ironclad04
Thanks guys!! its just an open humor type thing i did in school long time ago, I almost took poetry too! but thanks for the feedback!!
Next time, copy the thing correctly, so you don't lead anyone down a blind alley.
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Jun 7, 2009, 07:51 PM
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Originally Posted by Wondergirl
Next time, copy the thing correctly, so you don't lead anyone down a blind alley.
Do u have something better than ironclad?? Lol thanks for the feedback though!
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