Where did you get your education? How old are you?
Please, I'm not trying to take a cheap shot at you. When I interviewed applicants, I judged them by how they comported themselves. How well they spoke and wrote.
Unless I was compelled by higher management to interview the person who wrote the above solicitation, I would choose to spend my time interviewing another applicant.
Read what you wrote please. "Does not does" "hiring not hirring" "Lowell, MA not lowell ma" You need an "upgrade" what in devil are you talking about?
No punctuation combined with poor punctuation. Very poor verbalization skills!
Why would you expect to receive a positive response from the notice you sent in.
Try this:
Does any one know a really good employer that is hiring here in Lowell, MA. I just moved here and I really need a job. Please, please if you know of anyone hiring in this area, let me know as soon as possible.
Thank you!
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