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    Becca74 Posts: 32, Reputation: 2
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    Sep 30, 2007, 12:04 PM
    Read this and tell me what you think
    He took my heart broke it in two
    Ripped it apart and shattered it right though
    He never cared so why do I
    Sitting right here I start to cry
    Painful it hurts all you can do is say goodbye
    Try your best when you don't succeed
    Fall on your knees and start to pleed
    Why does it hurt so much... make it stop
    Maybe it will be better when I bleed
    Tears and blood fall down and plop on the floor
    With one last breath its over I say... I love you once more
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    Sep 30, 2007, 12:42 PM
    I think its poetic.

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