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    trevordog Posts: 17, Reputation: 0
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    #1

    Jul 13, 2007, 12:42 PM
    How r thes lyrics
    Now I didn't rite thes my friend did and she thinks they suck and I think I love them

    I see you from a distance.
    Wishing you were mine.
    I see you from a distance.
    And inside I'm dying.
    My eyes start to tear.
    I wish you were here.
    And I know that I
    Shouldn't be trying.
    I see you days later.
    Saying you hate her.
    Your heart torn in half.
    I walk over and sit down.
    Look around,
    And start to ask you
    What happened.
    You look in my eyes.
    I can tell you've been crying.
    TEars now streaming
    Down your face
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    JoeJaJoeJoe Posts: 14, Reputation: 7
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    Jul 13, 2007, 03:30 PM
    I really like them, though I think the ending is a little weak. Just a little bit more closure on the end and those lyrics would be golden.
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    Canada_Sweety Posts: 597, Reputation: 49
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    Jul 13, 2007, 04:05 PM
    The lyrics are great but maybe the ending could be fancied up a bit. Other wise it's perfect.
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    Haxzor50 Posts: 147, Reputation: 1
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    Jul 13, 2007, 05:50 PM
    A Perfect song, cept the end... you realise that is has no chorus? Which is perfectly okay with some songs, but most songs are atlease a minute and a half... try and time it?

    I really like the lyrics though! Just watch the rhythm, and the ending, I would love to know what the guy is crying about!
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    Jul 16, 2007, 03:55 PM
    Wow.
    These frkn rock!
    Whoever made these up must be a genious.
    Oh wait!
    That was me.
    :D
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