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    Nov 11, 2014, 06:01 AM
    Heart touching story on poor children struggling foe education.
    Can someone tell me a heart touching story about a child struggling for education. Please as soon as possible.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 06:09 AM
    Seriously !!!

    What do YOU think ?
    While we're happy to HELP we wont do all the work for you.
    Show us what you have done and where you are having problems..
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    Nov 11, 2014, 06:19 AM
    I have to make a start for is story and I was not understanding how to make a good start so I wanted some help.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 06:49 AM
    While we are willing to help you, site rules prevent us from doing your homework for you.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 06:51 AM
    Humor ? On a heart wrenching story about a child struggling for education. Sorry, no I don't think so. A story like this will start with heart break, sorry, show determination and hopefully finally victory,

    No, I don't see humor in there.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 06:59 AM
    Actually this is not a homework this is a topic I came up to write on by myself.

    Can I have any type of help from you please as soon as possible.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 07:04 AM
    We are all volunteers here. We don't get paid for this. If this is something you want to do on your own, then do it on your own.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 07:12 AM
    If this is something you set for yourself to write, then what is the time crunch?

    These are your characters and we can't give them life. Their story is inside your head so you are the one who will need to write it.

    One way to find the beginning is to pretend you are telling it to a friend. Who is telling the story? The child(ren), their parents, their teachers, someone else? Is it happening in the present? Is it a reflection on the past? Is it a fear for the future? Where is it happening? Is the place/time where the story occurs a major factor you need to set from the very beginning?

    Sometimes you have to write the rest of the story to find the beginning.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 07:17 AM
    I said that I want some help to make a good start. I am not saying that I want to do this work on my own. So ease help me.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 07:51 AM
    Quote Originally Posted by Laiba Asim View Post
    I said that I want some help to make a good start. I am not saying that I want to do this work on my own. So ease help me.
    Quote Originally Posted by Laiba Asim View Post
    Actually thhis is not a homework this is a topic I came up to write on by myself.

    Can I have any type of help from you please as soon as possible.
    Either it is home/school work or it is a personal project. Either way I know I have given all the help I can. I don't know what you want to say. I am not inside your mind.

    Once again, if it is a personal project, why do you need help immediately? Why not set it aside until you find the words you are looking for?
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    Nov 11, 2014, 08:12 AM
    Also, wondering why this is posted under the homework help subject if it is not homework.
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    Nov 11, 2014, 09:29 AM
    Start with action to hook your readers. Show, dont tell. Is there an action, an incident, at home or on the streets that pushed the main character to want education?
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    Nov 11, 2014, 10:43 PM
    Start telling the story, you can always go back and add and do re-write.

    And yes, tell the story from some point of view, the suggestion of telling it from the child's view can be great,

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