[lawrenceant]

HI I have a online business that has been running for almost 2 year =s now. IT is in the process of re-brnading and I ned help contacting new and better vendors to provide customers with exclusive/better merchandise. Can you help draft something that is professional and catching so the supplier would regret to not do business with us.

[JudyKayTee]

What is brnading? I don't think telling prospective people they will regret not dealing with you is a good marketing tool. Telling them why they should buy from you is a better idea.

What product or service?

[lawrenceant]

Sorry about that, fast typing. Re-branding i.e. New web design, new logo etc. My business is selling woman shoes online. I want to differ from other online independent shoe stores and offer a better selection and become worldwide, go to site. The company name is based on woman working together and building up one another and supporting each other in various business ventures

[joypulv]

No one wants to read self promotion or what someone thinks about their own business, a product, or a service. They want facts and figures. So make a list of specs and prices. Links to customer reviews are good too (I rely on them heavily as a consumer). Keep it all to ONE SCREEN and use links!

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