[defjam34]

I have been working on writing a song for my boyfriend on the piano and I just want some feedback on the song (not my playing) before I go any further. Thanks :) here's the link -- My Song

[Wondergirl]

You're a good pianist! (I had years of lessons and can't play by ear.)

Are you going to write lyrics for it?

[defjam34]

Thanks wondergirl, I took two or three lessons when I was eight or so and I can't read sheet music so I just memorize it and record songs that I make in case I forget. I don't think I am going to write lyrics for it because I am not comfortable with singing in public, but thanks :)

[Bmug12]

Very good! I think it would sound very good in an alternative or mainstream rock song, like in the background. Very impressive!

[LadySam]

Nice melody and beautifully played. You sure you're not interested in writing lyrics? A couple of possibilities just ran through my head. And if your writing skills compare to your music writing skills you could have a really nice song on your hands.

[Wondergirl]

It reminded me of the original piano melodies of Jim Brickman or David Lanz or even of John Tesh's songs.

I agree with LadySam. As I was listening to it, I could feel words in there.