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    Jun 7, 2009, 08:34 PM
    Quote me on this poem!
    Its called THE FACE

    This is the face that bares my name.
    Plain, ordinary, all the same.
    Look harder and you might see,
    This face tells you no part of me.
    It doesn't say how I feel inside.
    It doesn't tell you the things I hide.
    My face doesn't reveal what I think
    Of life, love, or politics.
    But you judge this face and you judge me,
    By what you look at, and how you see.
    But that's not where the truth lies.
    The truth is hidden behind my eyes.
    This is the face that bares my name.
    But it will never tell you how I feel,
    Or who I am!

    Written by ironclad04, 1998
    This one goes out to my new found buddy Altenweg!!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 08:38 PM

    Hi, ironclad04!

    That's quite nice! It seems to describe a type of stoicism.

    Thanks!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 08:46 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    Hi, ironclad04!

    That's quite nice! It seems to describe a type of stoicism.

    Thanks!

    Actually I was writing it at the time of a rasicm controversy we had in my school about blacks, and vietminese, and jewish people! I took great pride in presenting this poem to them in front of the whole school, thought they could use a little pride! Thanks for the input!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 08:51 PM

    Very, very nice! It rhymes without sounding rhyme-y (like so many do).

    Now, since I'm the AMHD queen of spelling and grammar (and punctuation), "bares" should be "bears."
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    Jun 7, 2009, 08:55 PM
    Gosh, Wondergirl! I didn't know you were a queen! :D
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    Jun 7, 2009, 08:59 PM
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    Gosh, Wondergirl! I didn't know you were a queen! :D
    There's a lot you don't know about me. And don't forget to bow before you leave.
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:01 PM

    I'm already standing up in your presence, your HIGHNESS!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:01 PM
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    Gosh, Wondergirl! I didn't know you were a queen! :D
    Did I miss something?? Didn't know you guys know each other?? Thanks for quoting me though, I will have to change that, did I write bares? It sound good to me at the time! Lol
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:03 PM

    Yeah, we know each other! She wants to be able to jazz piano!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:04 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by ironclad04 View Post
    did i miss something??? didnt know u guys know eachother??? thanks for quoting me though, i will have to change that, did i write bares?? it sound good to me at the time!! lol
    We're both from Illinois, so we got to know each other a long time ago. I know more about him than he knows about me, hee hee.
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:05 PM

    Don't make me have to come over there, Wondergirl! Behave yourself, now!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:07 PM
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    Don't make me have to come over there, Wondergirl! Behave yourself, now!
    I have the American Library Association on my side. Who's on yours?
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:10 PM
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    We're both from Illinois, so we got to know each other a long time ago. I know more about him than he knows about me, hee hee.
    Wow! U guys are something!! I was just goofing off and found myself all alone!? Until one day!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:11 PM

    The Barbershop Harmony Society! There's over 30,000 of us!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:11 PM
    And, watch it, Wondergirl! I can delete you! He, he!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:12 PM

    The cursor is mightier than the sword!!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:14 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by Clough View Post
    The cursor is mightier than the sword!!!!
    Curlyben is my BFF. HA!
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:14 PM
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    And, watch it, Wondergirl! I can delete you! He, he!
    OK clough, maybe I should drop guitar and stick to martial arts?? Wondergirl, lets do it!! Lol prepare for annilation clough, your good man, but I got to give it to wondergirl!? Sorry! Keep quoting me man, so wondergirl?? What do you really think?
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:16 PM

    Ironclad, the guy I dated for six years during part of high school and all of college but never married (but should have) lives in Brandon, VT. Are you anywhere near there?
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    Jun 7, 2009, 09:17 PM

    I think that you should take up something musical. Because, I can help you with learning about how to play things right on this site!

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