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    misswisdom7 Posts: 33, Reputation: 1
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    #1

    Jul 29, 2008, 01:46 PM
    Really need it
    Does anyone know a really good place where hirring in lowell ma, I really need a job I just moved here I also want to start college here, please please I need an upgrade you probably see this posting and not care but I need help
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    donf Posts: 5,679, Reputation: 582
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    #2

    Jul 29, 2008, 02:26 PM
    Where did you get your education? How old are you?

    Please, I'm not trying to take a cheap shot at you. When I interviewed applicants, I judged them by how they comported themselves. How well they spoke and wrote.

    Unless I was compelled by higher management to interview the person who wrote the above solicitation, I would choose to spend my time interviewing another applicant.

    Read what you wrote please. "Does not does" "hiring not hirring" "Lowell, MA not lowell ma" You need an "upgrade" what in devil are you talking about?

    No punctuation combined with poor punctuation. Very poor verbalization skills!

    Why would you expect to receive a positive response from the notice you sent in.

    Try this:

    Does any one know a really good employer that is hiring here in Lowell, MA. I just moved here and I really need a job. Please, please if you know of anyone hiring in this area, let me know as soon as possible.

    Thank you!
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    bEaUtIfUlbRuNeTtE Posts: 1,051, Reputation: 112
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    #3

    Jul 29, 2008, 02:29 PM
    Welcome to the Bay State (I also reside in MA and actually not to far from you)!
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    misswisdom7 Posts: 33, Reputation: 1
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    #4

    Jul 30, 2008, 03:08 PM
    Thank you

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