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    vinod_pal5 Posts: 1, Reputation: 1
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    Jul 17, 2010, 09:56 PM
    Proofread the following sentence :
    Application of these methods in stores in San Deigo and Cinncinati have resulted in a 30 drop in robberies an a 50 percent decling in violence there, according at the developers if the security system, Hanover brothrs, Inc.
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    Jul 17, 2010, 10:29 PM
    Quote Originally Posted by vinod_pal5 View Post
    application of these methods in stores in San Deigo nd Cinncinati have resulted in a 30 drop in robberies an a 50 percent decling in violence there, according at the developers if the security system, Hanover brothrs, Inc.
    Okay. I did. There are at least eleven mistakes in that sentence.
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    Jul 17, 2010, 10:35 PM
    Ditto that... first round I counted nine... second time, saw eleven potential mistakes.
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