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Many people agree that a good education is an important quality [huh?] to have in life. To achieve that good education, one must not only graduate from high school[omit ,] but also from college. Many people disagree on the similarities and differences between the two different [types of] education[omit s]. To compare and contrast them is almost unfair[omit ,] because they are two completely different worlds, each with [its] own individual qualities. The differences are aplenty, and in many ways they are also similar.
First off, almost every person in the United States can say that [he has] been to high school, with the majority [of people] saying they graduated. High school is a defining period in every person's life. It's [where] many [omit of your] first new experiences and life lessons are learned. From person to person, opinions will differ. Many believe it was the [best] time of their lives, while others say it was a time to forget and learn from. Either way, high school is an experience in itself.
High school is a period in which many new things happen. [It is a] world full of raging hormones, honors classes, and new[-]found freedoms. High school [can also be] routine in a way. [The requirement is for] eight or so classes year round, and [lunch always fits in somewhere]. The same kids [from] elementary and middle school probably are the same kids [in] high school. Basically, high school is much [more] regimented, and many [students] find themselves having the same friends for many years. Because of this, [omit in turn] once a [student's] "reputation" or "image" was established in high school, most likely that was going to stick with [that student] for the rest of [his] time left.
The work in high school is a piece of cake. Unless [a student is] taking honors or AP courses, there is really no reason why someone's GPA should drop below 2.75. Classes in high school are small in size, usually between twenty and thirty students, and there is a [one-on-one] feeling with the teacher. It is a [laid-back] atmosphere because everyone knows [everyone else].
Also in high school, many students find a way around the "school" part. Countless students slack off and don't apply themselves to their work or studies. Because of this, many students find themselves doing new extracurricular activities, and [omit I think] we all know what is meant by that. It is very easy in high school to fall into bad habits. High [s]chool is a perfect opportunity to go down the wrong path and find yourself in bad situations.
All in all, [h]igh school is a time for learning and new life experiences. Everyone should experience it, because it prepares [a student] for the next step in [omit your] life, and for many[,] that step is college.
Many people go on to college to further not only their education, but to broaden their horizons. College is a completely new experience with many unique aspects that can change and help define one's life. Many people love college[omit ,] and find it to be a new beginning. It is a new opportunity to define [oneself] as an individual [with] a new image, [since] everyone is looking to do the same thing.
In college, it's time to strap down and get to work. There's really no room for error. Classes are spread out throughout the week, and [a student often has] much down time. There is a lot of work and it is crammed into a short period. It is up to [the student] to know when to eat lunch, and it is up to [the student to know] when to study. It is also [the student's] decision to fill that time [when not studying or doing productive work].
College is a new beginning. [There are no tags for] a prior social status or image. It is an opportunity to start new and meet new people[--people who become] lifelong friends [omit in college,] because [of going] through so much together. In a way, [it's a transfer to] adulthood.
The major new aspect of college is if [a student dorms] there. To dorm at college really makes an individual grow up fast [as he provides for himself and takes care of himself.] [A student must interact with other students and learn how to] live with differences. It's a major transition from living at home for eighteen years[--to suddenly live with strangers in a new environment]. Many [students] find it exciting, while many others hate it.
Together, college is a collaboration of exciting new experiences, intellectual exploration, and the examination of [one's] true self. It's the next step in [a] young adult's lives that [leads him to become] who they truly are. College is [preparation for] adulthood, and [experiences help each student learn how to face] the challenges of tomorrow.
Many aspects of both high school and college can be tied together. For one, [during the first year of two of college, a student often reviews subjects learned in high school.] They are basic general education [or core] classes. Depending on the school, teachers can also give [omit you] that [one-on-one] help. Class sizes can also be similar to high school if [it's] a small college. There are similarities in the people also. Even in college [cliques] and groups develop, just like in high school. On a lighter note, [there are parties] in college just like in high school, probably a lot more[,] as a matter of fact. High school and college are similar because they are both learning experiences that the individual helps write for [himself by his] choices and decisions.
[This paragraph repeats ideas from one above.] On the other hand, we all know that high school and college are very different. Like I said before, they are two completely different worlds. In high school, everything is regimented and [the student is] told what to do. In college[,] classes are spread out and [there is] much down time to do what [extracurricular activities, have a part-time job, etc.] Also, in college, unlike high school, [a student lives with other students] in a dorm. [Survival becomes paramount, and unique and unfamiliar decisions are made.]
In conclusion, even though high school and college are very different, there are still similarities they share. High school prepares [omit you] for college. It is a time full of new experiences and lessons. College is a new chapter in life, and also a new beginning. In a way, college is a mature version of high school. As I said before, to compare and contrast them is unfair, because there are so many different things that an individual does to define the [college experience for himself.] High school and college are what [a student makes of them.] To find the true similarities and differences, one must experience both [omit for themselves].
High school, as well as college[,] is just another part in everyone's [life]. Almost everyone go through such a transition between two very diverse and different worlds. These diverse worlds can be compared and contrasted by everyone; however, not all are aware of the possible similarities and differences between them. The purpose of this essay is to compare the students' high school and college life in terms of the level of academic responsibilities, time schedule, as well as the culture practiced by each student.
First of all, high school is the first step to a higher level or learning. This place equips [students] with the proper knowledge needed in order to survive college and other higher levels of learning. The topics being taught in high school are generalized in basic Math, Science, English, Filipino, and many other subjects. The students are more relaxed and their responsibilities are not that complicated and heavy in a sense that there are fewer requirements and their due dates are not immediate. Compared to the time schedule of college students, a high school [student's] schedule is much more fixed because the standard call time is at 7:30a.m. and end at 5:00p.m. Students are much more immature and need guidance in order to lead fulfilling lives. They study inside a single classroom everyday; thus having little freedom.
College, on the other hand, is a different story. The subjects a student will learn and discuss are much more specific since [a career path is finally chosen]. College students are older and their workload is much more complex and heavier. They have more responsibilities to carry in college because the curriculum is much more specific and complicated because detailed topics are being discussed regarding [the] chosen career path. In contrast with the fixed regular schedule of high school students, college students' time schedules are very flexible because they have to choose their own desired time schedule. These students are much more outgoing and independent compared to high school students. The culture of college students is much more diverse because there is a huge number of students inside a college; each student has [his] own nationality, college students live in different locations from all over the country and cultures from high school are brought into college by the students.
People can really see the distinctive difference these two phases in life; however, there are also some similarities [noticeable] during [the] transition into college [life]. Friends from [omit your] high school will always be there[, omit for you, especially when a constant connection is kept]. Studying habits such as cramming for a test or homework, creating during a test or copying another student's homework, breaking the rules and disciplinary sanctions are still evident in both high school and college.
We all know that everyone goes through high school and college. We can compare that college is much more challenging and complex than high school. This is a higher level of learning, thus, requiring more time, effort as well as devotion to studies. Even though college is very tiring at times, I still believe that college is much more enjoyable and exciting. To have that kind of freedom in your schedule is very rewarding; however, proper judgment is a must since we are all mature students now.
