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  • Dec 5, 2017, 12:54 AM
    rowley 2004
    Grammar
    Hi. I want to make sure the quotes on our CA is grammatically correct:

    "To render payment to requesting Compenationto the subject within 14days upon approval by Party A"

    " To Authorize party B to pay to requesting the subject mentioned in Attachmen A on PartyC's behalf"

    Thank you in advance.
  • Dec 5, 2017, 01:25 AM
    J_9
    They are not at all correct. I’m not even sure what you are trying to say. Please clarify.
  • Dec 5, 2017, 07:19 AM
    ma0641
    Doesn't make sense to me.
  • Dec 5, 2017, 06:31 PM
    Alty
    I have no idea what you're trying to say, so I would have to say start at the beginning, try to use simple words to explain what you want to accomplish. I think you're trying too hard to make it sound like legalize and you're not doing it accurately enough for even educated people to understand what you mean.
  • Dec 5, 2017, 07:01 PM
    talaniman
    "To render payment to requesting Compenationto the subject within 14days upon approval by Party A"

    To render payment to requestor within 14 days upon approval by party A

    " To Authorize party B to pay to requesting the subject mentioned in Attachmen A on PartyC's behalf"

    To suthorize party B to pay the requestor mentioned in attachment A, on behalf of party C



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